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2. The following text was submitted by Victor L.C.</div>
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9. <span lang="es"><span style="color: red;">*Feedback in red</span></span></div>
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15. <span style="font-size: large;">The main topic discussed in both
16. paragraphs is outdoor advertising and how it interacts with people. While the
17. first <strike>one</strike> text embraces this form of publicity and its applications with the growth
18. of technology, the second one <u>criticizes</u> its invasiveness. <span style="color: red;">(American spelling)</span></span></div>
19. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 12pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
20. <span lang="es"><span style="font-size: large;"><strike>On one hand </strike>On the one hand, "<i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">the excitement of advertising"</i> <u>describes how the purpose of this
21. marketing technique, which is involvement and getting into the customer’s mind,
22. allows it to be really prolific</u>.<span style="color: red;">(Check grammar)</span> Nonetheless, with the rapid growth of
23. technology, companies must hurry themselves to use <span style="color: red;">them</span> for their own good in
24. order to keep up to date and be displayed widely. Innovations like these are
25. opening a world of opportunities for companies due to their low costs and high
26. rates of interaction with the public.<o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
27. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 12pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
28. <span lang="es"><span style="font-size: large;"><strike>Meanwhile,</strike> On the other hand, "<i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">Advertising: a desirable business"</i><strike>, For
29. one thing, </strike>remarks how the situation has gone from billboards and unharmful
30. campaigns that could be easily ignored to a whole new level of surreptitious
31. publicity that keeps barraging potential customers with truckloads of products
32. that have been just launched into the market and become the talk of town which
33. is found excessive and not even practical.<span style="color: red;">(Sentence is too long: punctuation)</span> <strike>For another thing </strike>Furthermore people find
34. outrageous that companies <u>target people whose self-control is almost
35. non-existent <span style="color: red;">(Who do you mean? Children? Sounds rather rude) </span></u>and therefore accuse businesses of malpractice.<o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
36. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 12pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
37. <span lang="es"><span style="font-size: large;">On the whole, marketing is a necessary
38. and effective technique which allows an increase in revenues but <strike>whose</strike> which impacts
39. are usually belittled and might make people feel devoid of their privacy.
40. Cookies are a clear example of this, personally designed advertisements based
41. on what your searches on the internet are, suggest that maybe we have gone too
42. far in terms of creating a feeling that we are constantly being tracked by
43. companies. <span style="color: red;">(Why mention cookies at the last minute? Conclusion should be about what you already mentioned)</span><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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48. </content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/8503592941226650855/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/10/cpe-essay-sample-on-advertising.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/8503592941226650855'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/8503592941226650855'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/10/cpe-essay-sample-on-advertising.html' title='CPE Essay Sample on Advertising'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgG50kCd_bCmfkQ4VNF5aKXNDxFFvirNL2FBVDRh2Yx_IxcThRdObvYvPHK0rKK_H12Z9g4-jAj8gJcgrqv-jyHOqi_IJ7vav_Qcq8TWmuMj1xtQg6B58IOL1egu4KhIwVEmo5wxotzu-o/s72-c/advertisement+essay.JPG" height="72" width="72"/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-5620636946957075769</id><published>2019-08-27T12:55:00.001-07:00</published><updated>2019-10-26T10:18:40.106-07:00</updated><title type='text'>CPE Report 2019 The healthcare system in Spain</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class=&quot;separator&quot; style=&quot;clear: both; text-align: left;&quot;&gt;
49. The following writing was submitted by Rodrigo, who is planning to take a C2 level examination soon. The report is well structured but presents several mistakes. </div>
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53. Let's support Rodrigo with some comments. All the best !</div>
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61. <h2 style="text-align: center;">
62. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">The
63. healthcare system in Spain</span></b></h2>
64. <div style="text-align: right;">
65. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;"><span style="color: red;">Feedback in red</span></span></b></div>
66. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
67. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">Introduction<o:p></o:p></span></b></div>
68. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
69. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;"><br /></span></div>
70. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
71. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">The aim of the report is to analyse the current situation of the
72. healthcare system in Spain, outlining the positive and negative points, as well as to <strike>stating</strike> to provide recommendations <strike>that could</strike> on how to make some improvement. </span></div>
73. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
74. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;"><br /></span></div>
75. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
76. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">Current situation<o:p></o:p></span></b></div>
77. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
78. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;"><br /></span></div>
79. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
80. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">It could be said that the healthcare in Spain is among the best ones around
81. the world, despite <strike>of</strike> the problems that we all could have in mind.<span style="color: red;"> (Which ones? We are not in Spain)</span> In order to
82. have a better understanding of it, I have done <span style="color: red;">(better in passive voice: a survey was carried out...)</span> a survey to different <i>players
83. </i>related to healthcare<i> </i><span style="color: red;">(players?? check!)</span> such as <strike>pacients</strike> patients, medical proffesionals, material
84. suppliers and pharmacies. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
85. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
86. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;"><br /></span></div>
87. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
88. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">Seldom <i>have they mentioned <span style="color: red;">(why present perfect? check grammar)</span></i> positive points to be outlined, but the few
89. ones are the basis of the whole system:<o:p></o:p></span></div>
90. <div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: -18pt;">
91. <!--[if !supportLists]--><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "symbol"; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-family: Symbol; mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol; mso-no-proof: yes;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;">·<span style="font-family: "times new roman"; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;">    - </span></span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">The attention is free and guaranted to all <strike>the</strike> patients.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
92. <div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: -18pt;">
93. <!--[if !supportLists]--><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "symbol"; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-family: Symbol; mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol; mso-no-proof: yes;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;">·<span style="font-family: "times new roman"; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;">   - </span></span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">The medical proffesionals are considered very well prepared
94. and skillful, with a great experience in the field. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
95. <div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: -18pt;">
96. <!--[if !supportLists]--><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "symbol"; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-family: Symbol; mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol; mso-no-proof: yes;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;">·<span style="font-family: "times new roman"; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;">    - </span></span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">The machinery and <i>equipments <span style="color: red;">(uncountable)</span></i> in use are brand new, featuring
97. updated capabilities.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
98. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
99. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;"><br /></span></div>
100. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
101. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">These are great positive remarks, albeit there are well-known negative
102. points that were outlined:</span><span style="text-indent: -18pt;"> </span></div>
103. <div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: -18pt;">
104. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">      -Waiting time to be attended is longer than it should be. Even
105. more for operations rather diagnosis. <span style="color: red;">(check grammar)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
106. <div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: -18pt;">
107. <!--[if !supportLists]--><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "symbol"; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-family: Symbol; mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol; mso-no-proof: yes;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;">·<span style="font-family: "times new roman"; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;">    -</span></span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;"><strike>Instalations</strike> Facilities are old and a renewal is becoming a must<o:p></o:p></span></div>
108. <div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="text-align: justify; text-indent: -18pt;">
109. <!--[if !supportLists]--><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "symbol"; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-family: Symbol; mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol; mso-no-proof: yes;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;">·<span style="font-family: "times new roman"; font-stretch: normal; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;">   -</span></span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">The payment terms among the different partners (public
110. entities to suppliers and to pharmacies) are too long.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
111. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
112. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;"><br /></span></b></div>
113. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
114. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">Measures for improvement<o:p></o:p></span></b></div>
115. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
116. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">The adjusted budget of the public entity determines that more
117. proffesionals, better <strike>instalations </strike>facilities and more fluent payments<i> is hardly to be
118. assumed at the same time</i>. <span style="color: red;">(check grammar)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
119. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
120. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;"><br /></span></div>
121. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
122. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">However, the possibility of co-payment in order to reduce the level of
123. overcrowding will give a release on the waiting lists and could be a plus to
124. enhance the payment terms in the supply chain.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
125. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
126. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;"><br /></span></b></div>
127. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
128. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">Conclusion<o:p></o:p></span></b></div>
129. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
130. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">Bearing in mind all the points detailed, we could say <span style="color: red;">(why in conditional?) </span>we have a great
131. healthcare system, whereas <span style="color: red;">(check the use of whereas)</span> some improvements need to be done to keep it in the
132. upper part of the world ranking. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
133. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
134. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-no-proof: yes;">In my opinion, the co-payment recommendation would be a good starting
135. point to solve this<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>tangled situation.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
136. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
137. <br /></div>
138. <div style="text-align: justify;">
139. Rodrigo</div>
140. </content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/5620636946957075769/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/08/cpe-report-2019-healthcare-system-in.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/5620636946957075769'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/5620636946957075769'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/08/cpe-report-2019-healthcare-system-in.html' title='CPE Report 2019 The healthcare system in Spain'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEioWWYSPBN3QP-uvn0FIzHzPNoMD0MVaM3t5mPWfXqyyQYwPPx0POoaxW3ZNXamEA8r_ZNexa6bR04XE3WfeFOyQQNmxzw4g9Qvzmld6GaeexbKZDgyMTdrZJJAotqmsWXQsfOHVES05iY/s72-c/278.jpg" height="72" width="72"/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-3564719775595698058</id><published>2019-06-12T00:16:00.002-07:00</published><updated>2019-06-12T00:16:28.696-07:00</updated><title type='text'>CPE Exam 2019 Sample Report</title><content type='html'>&lt;br /&gt;
141. <div style="text-align: justify;">
142. The following text was submitted by Flora. I have added some comments in red as feedback. Unfortunately, without the task or a photo of the task, it is very difficult for me to provive more accurate and detailed feedback. </div>
143. <div style="text-align: justify;">
144. <br /></div>
145. <div style="text-align: justify;">
146. I hope it helps anyways!</div>
147. <div style="text-align: justify;">
148. <br /></div>
149. <h2 style="text-align: center;">
150. <b>International Film Club Report 2018-2019</b></h2>
151. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
152. <span lang="EN-GB"><o:p> <span style="color: red;">(An introduction is missing)</span></o:p></span></div>
153. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
154. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB"><br /></span></b></div>
155. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
156. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB">Events <span style="color: red;">(Last year's events, better?)</span><o:p></o:p></span></b></div>
157. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
158. <span lang="EN-GB"><strike>Reminiscing on the International Film Club’s (IFC) past year</strike><strike style="text-decoration-line: underline;"> </strike><span style="color: red;">(change or eliminate)</span><u>,</u> the
159. club’s <span style="color: red;">"</span>Italian film weekend<span style="color: red;">",</span> which was held in February<span style="color: red;">,</span> proved to be a great
160. success with many members expressing their encouragement. This leads (<span style="color: red;">past tense?)</span> the club’s
161. board to give consideration to a recurrence of the popular event in the year of
162. 2020. Furthermore, the annual dinner with this year’s special guest John
163. Favreau held at the Shoreditch Hotel was <u>a well-attended success</u> <span style="color: red;">(change) </span>as ever.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
164. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
165. <br /></div>
166. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
167. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB">Future plans<o:p></o:p></span></b></div>
168. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
169. <span lang="EN-GB">In <strike>the year of</strike> 2019-2020, IFC is determined to bring even more
170. interesting cinematic insights to its esteemed members. Not only can the board
171. confirm it has recently tied down director Anthony Russo for a lecture on
172. suspense in blockbusters <span style="color: red;">(</span>scheduled to be held in December 2019 at the club’s
173. headquarters in London<span style="color: red;">)</span>, <span style="color: red;">but </span>it can also corroborate new plans of an advanced video
174. library. IFC members will be enabled to consult this database at the club’s
175. headquarters as well as at our website. <span style="color: red;">(In general some sentences are too long)<o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
176. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
177. <br /></div>
178. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
179. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB">Finances<o:p></o:p></span></b></div>
180. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
181. <span lang="EN-GB">This year’s earnings<u> consists of <span style="color: red;">(check "consist of")) </span></u>the contribution of 32 fresh
182. members and the generous £30,000 grant from the National Film Association. This
183. adds up to an income of £38,000. All outgoing expenses this year comprise the
184. renting of films and the purchase of new stationery, such as a suitable film
185. projector and the furnishing of the recently procured meeting room. These cost £20,100.
186. This leaves us with a rough grand total of £20,700 to spend on the organisation
187. of further club meetings. Everything taken into account, the International Film
188. Club will be faring well in the year of 2019-2020. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
189. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
190. <br /></div>
191. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
192. <span lang="EN-GB"><o:p><span style="color: red;">(A conclusion is missing)</span></o:p></span></div>
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194. <a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhqmtaVgw5KM7GWMairb4je5ld2NtOwCYN14gwiL6parhEoJPtL6ntoOMgnrgQI6CxaMBjHR0s18ZWBljxQPNqixpLx0corq-9ft2qTJI9jm7OYRHP-xOm7BZTMPfvJPsgX8h_MN6lNK9c/s1600/1104.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1600" data-original-width="900" height="640" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhqmtaVgw5KM7GWMairb4je5ld2NtOwCYN14gwiL6parhEoJPtL6ntoOMgnrgQI6CxaMBjHR0s18ZWBljxQPNqixpLx0corq-9ft2qTJI9jm7OYRHP-xOm7BZTMPfvJPsgX8h_MN6lNK9c/s640/1104.jpg" width="360" /></a></div>
195. <br />
196. <div class="MsoNormal">
197. <span style="color: red;">Feedback in red </span></div>
198. <div class="MsoNormal">
199. <br /></div>
200. <div align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: center;">
201. <h2>
202. <span lang="IT" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 18pt;">CONSUMERISM AND EVOLVING TECHNOLOGY</span></h2>
203. </div>
204. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
205. <br /></div>
206. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
207. <span lang="IT" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;">The first text points out the great deal of stuff
208. being thrown away every week<strike>; as a matter of fact,</strike> Both governments and private
209. citizens are trying to do their best to enhance recycling. <s>This line of
210. reasoning should not make us safe and thoroughly</s> We should not be so
211. proud though, <s>insofar</s> as this seems not to be enough to
212. prevent situations like marine life from being irreversibly endangered. </span><span lang="IT" style="color: red; font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;">(Re-write + Add a couple of lines
213. including personal opinion)</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
214. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
215. <br />
216. <a name='more'></a><br /></div>
217. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
218. <s><span lang="IT" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;">In contrast,</span></s><span lang="IT" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;"> The second text
219. highlights the <s>catastrophic effects of the fast pace of technological
220. change, according to which we normally go on being subdued to keeping</s> fact
221. that we keep electronic devices only for a short time. u<s>rthermore,
222. notwithstang their quality standards we seem to sometimes neglect, we merely
223. rely on flattering</s> Advertising messages compell us to discard our
224. present gadgets in favour of the latest ones. To a certain extent, remaining
225. backward turns out to be the greatest shortcoming to be feared by anyone
226. nowadays. </span><span lang="IT" style="color: red; font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;">(Re-write + Add 
227. a couple of lines including personal opinion)</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
228. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
229. <br /></div>
230. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
231. <span lang="IT" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;">Both texts describe the most devastating effects of
232. consumerism, which is utterly affecting the environment because of the huge
233. amount of waste produced. In conclusion, mass consumerism should, therefore, be
234. legally discouraged <u>in favour of the implementation of mental
235. independence of clichés </u></span><u><span lang="IT" style="color: red; font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;">(?? )</span></u><span lang="IT" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;">, as well as of the
236. hyperconditioning and tantalising power of advertising which underlies wild
237. consumerism.</span><span lang="IT" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 18pt;">  </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
238. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
239. <br /></div>
240. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
241. <span lang="IT" style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 18pt;">Annamaria D’Anna</span><span style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
242. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center;">
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245. <br /></div>
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247. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><b>Hi everybody ! </b>I received this Article Sample from Debora. I post it here with some feedback.</span></div>
248. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 12.0pt;">
249. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">Unfortunately, I have to say I have some issues with it. To me it looks more like a job advertisement than an article. I would stronly suggest making changes. Take a look and feel free to provide your own feedback !</span></div>
250. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 12.0pt;">
251. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">...</span></div>
252. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 12.0pt;">
253. <b><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">Question:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"> You have been
254. asked to write an article for Job Prospects magazine, a publication for 18-30
255. year olds, on the following topic:</span></div>
256. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: #CEE3F6; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 10.0pt;">
257. <b><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">How taking a gap year* can enhance your career prospects.</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
258. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 12.65pt; margin-bottom: 10.0pt;">
259. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">You should focus on
260. the types of job and leisure opportunities for young people taking a gap
261. year in your country (or a country that you know well), the types
262. of skills that can be gained and the likely value of these to potential
263. employers.<br />
264. <br />
265. Write the <b>article</b> for the readers of the magazine. (around 280
266. - 320 words)</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
267. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 12.65pt; margin-bottom: 10.0pt;">
268. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #333333; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><br />
269. <!--[if !supportLineBreakNewLine]--><br />
270. <!--[endif]--></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
271. <h2 style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 10pt; text-align: center;">
272. <b><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">Take a gap year and boost your career
273. prospects</span></b></h2>
274. <div>
275. <b><span lang="EN-US"><span style="color: red;">Feedback in red</span></span></b></div>
276. <div>
277. <b><span lang="EN-US"><span style="color: red;"><br /></span></span></b></div>
278. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 10pt; text-align: justify;">
279. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;"><br /></span></div>
280. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 10pt; text-align: justify;">
281. <span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">A gap year is a chance to figure
282. yourself out, get in contact with alternative ways of life and
283. enhance your skills. Besides, more than ever employers <u>are seeking for
284. talents beyond the knowledge itself.</u> </span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="color: red;">(What do you mean?) </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">Having this experience will put
285. yourself in an unknown situation every day, strengthening your decision-making
286. capabilities. It will present you with the chance to become a better
287. version of yourself! It doesn’t matter if your gap year is just before college
288. or in mid-jobs; there is always room for improving old habits and creating good
289. new ones.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span><br />
290. <span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;"></span></span><br />
291. <a name='more'></a><span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;"><br /></span></span></div>
292. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 10pt; text-align: justify;">
293. <span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">-Options all around:  </span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="color: red;">(Not so common to use subtitles in articles)</span></span></span></div>
294. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 10pt; text-align: justify;">
295. <span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">Have you ever considered living with
296. a host family in another country? Do you like kids? If you answered yes,
297. the Au pair program is for you! This authentic way to perceive a new culture
298. will change your life. Although living with another family may not be the
299. easiest job ever, you’ll learn to compromise, be gentle, caring and
300. responsible; it is an experience to take forever. .</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
301. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 10pt; text-align: justify;">
302. <span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">Are you an adventurous person who
303. would love to visit many countries? The Skills program is for you! There you
304. will visit around 10 and, from cooking to building a small house, you can
305. choose the skills you’d like to learn. It might be a unique opportunity to
306. understand more about your strengths and how to overcome obstacles.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
307. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 10pt; text-align: justify;">
308. <span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222;">If altruism is your cup of tea,
309. volunteering is for you! Getting to know other ways of life and also
310. being able to give yourself and your time to improve other people's stories is
311. truly a worthy year gap!</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
312. <div style="text-align: justify;">
313. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "calibri" , sans-serif; font-size: large; line-height: 107%;">These 3 options are not
314. even stretching the surface and a bunch of other alternatives are available in
315. the market. You should not miss out in this amazing opportunity and plan your
316. gap top-notch year!</span></div>
317. </content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/2593457568135786174/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/03/cpe-article-on-gap-year.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/2593457568135786174'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/2593457568135786174'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/03/cpe-article-on-gap-year.html' title='CPE Article on Gap Year '/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-3569863262443614232</id><published>2019-03-06T08:06:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2019-04-11T02:52:13.712-07:00</updated><title type='text'>CPE Essay on Zoos Sample writing</title><content type='html'>&lt;br /&gt;
318. <div style="text-align: left;">
319. Here there is a sample writing sent by Elena. My feedback is in red.</div>
320. <div style="text-align: left;">
321. <br /></div>
322. <div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
323. <a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgJAzNeD0s8L0tdzUIuQrtAyDygnuyOcWd4MZAaFtKEzZLymR6tpudmJnpCtG5rtDsgiLjYn4Tp7DcaRiTrBEJjSuBU_YSTnwCXBVGmlOGWj19sgLk85HM4Gllvfm7btcJlNbOt4scJHoE/s1600/task+essay+%25281%2529.jpeg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="893" data-original-width="1600" height="221" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgJAzNeD0s8L0tdzUIuQrtAyDygnuyOcWd4MZAaFtKEzZLymR6tpudmJnpCtG5rtDsgiLjYn4Tp7DcaRiTrBEJjSuBU_YSTnwCXBVGmlOGWj19sgLk85HM4Gllvfm7btcJlNbOt4scJHoE/s400/task+essay+%25281%2529.jpeg" width="400" /></a></div>
324. <div style="text-align: left;">
325. <br /></div>
326. <h2 style="text-align: center;">
327. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Essay on Zoos</span></b></h2>
328. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
329. <span lang="EN-US" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><br /></span></div>
330. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
331. <a href="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSgFhOMv2JcTmgQNCMjQNbweTFKdRrMaHLC6qFnX6mRfUzIXuTtPg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img alt="Resultado de imagen de zoo" border="0" src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSgFhOMv2JcTmgQNCMjQNbweTFKdRrMaHLC6qFnX6mRfUzIXuTtPg" /></a><span style="font-size: large;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Nowadays it is widely acknowledged how<strike> much it is</strike> important it is to protect and study endangered</span> species. Which better way to do it
332. than keeping animals in zoos? But to which extent do zoos really represent a salvation
333. for those animals? <span style="color: red; font-size: xx-small;">(Suggestion: Use more adjectives like "utterly important")</span></span></div>
334. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
335. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"></span><br />
336. <a name='more'></a><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><br /></span></div>
337. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
338. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Some people argue that animals living in zoos suffer, due to the limited areas they are restrained in. Moreover, the
339. majority of zoo-keepers use violence to “educate” animals, impinging on their
340. physical and psychological health.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> 
341. </span>Animals in zoos are literally deprived of their freedom <strike>and living</strike> as they are force to live in
342. an artificial environment. <u>Humans can not learn much about their real habits
343. and behaviour. </u><span style="color: red; font-size: xx-small;"> (Last sentence is not connected to the previous one).</span></span></div>
344. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
345. <span style="font-size: large;"><br /></span></div>
346. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
347. <span style="font-size: large;">On the other hand,
348. many members of the scientific community claim that zoos are fundamental for
349. the preservation of endangered species which, if left in the wild, would face
350. an inevitable and rapid extinction. These scientists take
351. into account the fact that humans actions have taken those animals to this
352. point, on the verge of their demise, therefore it is our responsibility to take
353. care of endangered species, intervening to save them from a threatening
354. environment. Nevertheless, the places in which only threatened species or injured animals are kept, in order to be looked after and eventually released in the wild, are just a few. Zoos are mostly entertainment means, visited every day by hundreds of people which are not fully aware of the pain the animals they are looking at are feeling.<span style="color: red;">(</span><span style="color: red; font-size: xx-small;">In the intro you mentioned first that zoos are good for animals and then that maybe they are not so good. Then, you should follow the same order in the paragrpahs: paragraph 2 should be positive and paragraph 3 should be negative)</span></span></div>
355. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
356. <span style="font-size: large;"><br /></span></div>
357. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
358. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">To conclude, <u>it seems
359. obvious </u>that we need to create more structures where animals can be studied and
360. healed without compromising their life’s conditions, without using them for
361. ridiculous shows which only cause them pain. In order to do that, one of the
362. essential step is making our community aware of the critical situation our
363. world is living. <span style="color: red;">(<span style="font-size: xx-small;">Don't use "it seems obvious", it sounds too informal, plus, is it really that obvious? Don't use "ridiculous", avoid making strong judgements).</span></span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
364. <div class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
365. <span style="font-size: large;"><br /></span></div>
366. <div align="right" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: right;">
367. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">292 words<o:p></o:p></span></u></div>
368. <div class="MsoNormal">
369. <span style="font-size: large;"><br /></span></div>
370. &lt;br /&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/3569863262443614232/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/03/cpe-essay-on-zoos-sample-writing.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/3569863262443614232'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/3569863262443614232'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/03/cpe-essay-on-zoos-sample-writing.html' title='CPE Essay on Zoos Sample writing'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgJAzNeD0s8L0tdzUIuQrtAyDygnuyOcWd4MZAaFtKEzZLymR6tpudmJnpCtG5rtDsgiLjYn4Tp7DcaRiTrBEJjSuBU_YSTnwCXBVGmlOGWj19sgLk85HM4Gllvfm7btcJlNbOt4scJHoE/s72-c/task+essay+%25281%2529.jpeg" height="72" width="72"/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-4262666019840330274</id><published>2019-03-05T06:47:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2019-04-11T02:53:41.841-07:00</updated><title type='text'>CPE Essay on Youth Culture</title><content type='html'>&lt;br /&gt;
371. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
372. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Essay<o:p></o:p></span></b></div>
373. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
374. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><o:p>The following essay was submitted by John, from the Neatherlands. A couple of small corrections can be found in colour red.</o:p></span></div>
375. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
376. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><o:p><br /></o:p></span></div>
377. <div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
378. <a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjaA4XLgWBUWrsHENE1trhH_eGg3wkf99CyejA1Fe6O7npFT906bKzYVcTzO5r4jax4Ucb6L81yWLdPIzQ7cYB9PLvSEYfN6qTd4g7AK3_xUD-EosKVr49iGBac4yIUKn2UZtC-D5S-kw0/s1600/Writing+Essay+task+youth+culture.jpeg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1600" data-original-width="900" height="640" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjaA4XLgWBUWrsHENE1trhH_eGg3wkf99CyejA1Fe6O7npFT906bKzYVcTzO5r4jax4Ucb6L81yWLdPIzQ7cYB9PLvSEYfN6qTd4g7AK3_xUD-EosKVr49iGBac4yIUKn2UZtC-D5S-kw0/s640/Writing+Essay+task+youth+culture.jpeg" width="360" /></a></div>
379. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
380. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><o:p><br /></o:p></span></div>
381. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
382. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><o:p><br /></o:p></span></div>
383. <h2 style="text-align: center;">
384. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-weight: normal;"><o:p>Essay on Youth Culture </o:p></span></h2>
385. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
386. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><br /></span></div>
387. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
388. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">The term
389. ‘youth culture’ found its name in the 1960s. Young people changed their views
390. on several aspects of daily life. There are also people who have tried to
391. figure out what ‘youth culture’ involves. Both texts emphasize<strike><span style="color: red;">s</span></strike> style and innovations.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
392. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
393. <span style="font-size: large;"></span><br />
394. <a name='more'></a><span style="font-size: large;"><br /></span></div>
395. <div class="MsoNoSpacing" style="text-align: justify;">
396. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Text one
397. states that the switch among people started with a few rebellions in the 1960s.
398. Appreciating new music, arts, clothing styles and political views were part of
399. the alteration at the time. Besides the contempt, this ever growing group was
400. determined to maintain and extend their habits. The second text gives arguments
401. about what have caused ‘youth culture’. The author mentions that a certain
402. group of young people were manipulated by the availability of what is on the
403. market. Simultaneously, others have tried to depict the financial and social
404. circumstances of their environment.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
405. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
406. <span style="font-size: large;"><br /></span></div>
407. <div class="MsoNoSpacing" style="text-align: justify;">
408. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">In my
409. opinion, we have to respect everyone whatever their political colours, habits
410. and styles are. To be honest, people should encourage <strike>those who</strike> other people to dare to step out
411. their comfort zone. Most of the time <span style="color: red;">it <strike>are</strike></span> is young people who come up with new
412. ideas. They are open-minded and a reflection of a particular period. Thereby, we
413. should keep in account the social and economic background where they live in. This
414. has a significant influence on their political ideas, creative minds and
415. stylistic opportunities. <span style="color: red; font-size: xx-small;">(Consider revising. Not so sure what your point it. I suggest re-reading the last lines).</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
416. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
417. <span style="font-size: large;"><br /></span></div>
418. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
419. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">In
420. conclusion, ‘youth culture’ is a term which started in the 1960s. Through the
421. years young people envisage a quintessential period of that time. From my
422. perspective, we should support them because they are innovative and therefore
423. give colour to several aspects of our daily life.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
424. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
425. <span style="font-size: large;"><br /></span></div>
426. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
427. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: large; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Words: 265<o:p></o:p></span></b></div>
428. &lt;br /&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/4262666019840330274/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/03/cpe-essay-on-youth-culture.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/4262666019840330274'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/4262666019840330274'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/03/cpe-essay-on-youth-culture.html' title='CPE Essay on Youth Culture'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjaA4XLgWBUWrsHENE1trhH_eGg3wkf99CyejA1Fe6O7npFT906bKzYVcTzO5r4jax4Ucb6L81yWLdPIzQ7cYB9PLvSEYfN6qTd4g7AK3_xUD-EosKVr49iGBac4yIUKn2UZtC-D5S-kw0/s72-c/Writing+Essay+task+youth+culture.jpeg" height="72" width="72"/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-1488234576754822550</id><published>2019-03-05T06:11:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2019-03-05T06:23:00.643-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Bad Restaurant Review </title><content type='html'>&lt;div style=&quot;text-align: justify;&quot;&gt;
429. <span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif;">Hello everybody. I received this "Bad Restaurant Review" from Alberto, who is studying for the Oficial School of Languages C2 English exam in Spain. I have posted his writing with some feedback in red. In general I think there are some positive points in his document like organising the text into paragraphs and addressing different aspects (location, service, quality of food,...) but some improvement needs to be done: the vocabulary is from B2/C1, not C2 and the style is rather informal and aggressive.</span></div>
430. <div style="text-align: justify;">
431. <span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
432. <span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif;"><br /></span>
433. <br />
434. <h2 style="text-align: center;">
435. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><b>Bad restaurant review.</b></span></h2>
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439. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><br /></span>
440. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Yesterday I
441. had the unpleasant experience of <span style="color: red;">attending to</span> one of the most overrated
442. restaurants on the coast of Valencia. </span><strike>The name</strike> Its name, should you know, is “Els pins” and it is located on a kind of waste land which they
443. have the audacity to call landscape. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(In my opinion a little too aggressive. Check if  the use of "attend to" is correct).</span></div>
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445. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><br /></span></div>
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447. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Once
448. inside, you are greeted with the most distasteful furniture. The tables and
449. chairs are simply dreadful and as for the table cloths there is only one thing
450. to be said and is that they are made of paper. </span>There is no
451. doubt that in this establishment, functionality is more important than any kind
452. of style. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Once again a little too harsh, which makes it sound childish/unprofessional to me, like written by an angry teenager)</span></div>
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454. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><br /></span></div>
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456. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">The service
457. is the sort one that one would expect form a fast food chain, but without its speed and
458. simplicity. </span>The
459. waitresses (all females) were more concerned about how they looked rather than
460. <u>who to look</u>. It seemed like a competition and the one to take the longest time attending a table was the winner. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">("who to look" not clear what you mean)</span></div>
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462. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><br /></span></div>
463. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
464. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">After
465. having endured all this nonsense, the thought of enjoying a good meal seemed to
466. me impossible, this is when things turned really interesting. </span>We ordered
467. the infamous dish paella, we thought, what can go wrong? after all, we are in
468. Valencia birth place of rice dishes in Spain. What it was
469. presented to us was an unrecognisable mash of what seemed to be a mixture of
470. rice vegetables and a lonely chicken breast. At this point I had to convince
471. myself into trying it. You know
472. when they say, trust your first instincts. Well, I should have followed that
473. advice. The moment
474. I put the spoon into my mouth it felt like an explosion. It was as spicy as a
475. Tabasco soup. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Even thought it is a negative review, you could try softening it and making it more respectful. Also, the use of "you know" and the use of questions, make it very informal, and I don't know if this is a good idea).</span></div>
476. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
477. <br /></div>
478. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
479. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">At this
480. time, I had enough of this torture and asked for the check. To my surprise the
481. previously deceptive waitresses came alive and rushed with the check as if
482. their life depended on it.  </span>I won´t
483. comment on the price because whoever pays to be taken for a fool deserves to be
484. one. Never again
485. will I lay eyes on this sorry excuse of a restaurant. It is banned from my list
486. and so it should be from anyone´s.</div>
487. <div class="MsoNormal">
488. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">363 words.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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493. &lt;span style=&quot;background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: &amp;quot;arial&amp;quot; , &amp;quot;helvetica&amp;quot; , sans-serif; font-size: x-small;&quot;&gt;&lt;/span&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/1488234576754822550/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/03/bad-restaurant-review.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/1488234576754822550'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/1488234576754822550'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/03/bad-restaurant-review.html' title='Bad Restaurant Review '/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-6640764814779291486</id><published>2019-02-26T03:43:00.002-08:00</published><updated>2019-02-26T03:43:39.850-08:00</updated><title type='text'>CPE Essay on unsustainable tourism</title><content type='html'>Hi again! I just got this essay sample from John, from the Neatherlands. I post it below together with the task and some feedback. As always, feel free to comment below.&lt;br /&gt;
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496. <div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
497. <a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiBvBYRV3-AYAFk1E0hikLDmQ5fUxS8tKfLdqdJ-ye95XCySxorv40QIwhybnrPQGSqk5IOwJDIdCBFlYbivMmdbWPGe4Ep8I5-kbvl8k1hHMlN3aCZ85rEM_wIGV80Xg2ZPVUQDYH8mYA/s1600/Writing+essay.jpeg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1600" data-original-width="1164" height="400" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiBvBYRV3-AYAFk1E0hikLDmQ5fUxS8tKfLdqdJ-ye95XCySxorv40QIwhybnrPQGSqk5IOwJDIdCBFlYbivMmdbWPGe4Ep8I5-kbvl8k1hHMlN3aCZ85rEM_wIGV80Xg2ZPVUQDYH8mYA/s400/Writing+essay.jpeg" width="290" /></a></div>
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501. <h2 style="text-align: center;">
502. <span lang="EN-GB">Essay on unsustainable tourism</span></h2>
503. <div class="MsoNoSpacing">
504. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><span style="color: red;">                                                                                                                              Feedback in red</span></span></div>
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506. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;"><br /></span></div>
507. <div class="MsoNoSpacing" style="text-align: justify;">
508. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Enjoying
509. a holiday after a period of hard work is what most people appreciate. <u>Once the
510. journey has been taken place to a particular holiday destiny you become a
511. tourist at a place where more travellers can be found.</u> Such crowded places
512. cannot always manage these waves of people during a certain period and that is
513. what both texts have in common. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Consider re-writing the intro. I don't see much connection between the lines. Second line also sounds "unnatural" to me).</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
514. <div class="MsoNoSpacing" style="text-align: justify;">
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516. <div class="MsoNoSpacing" style="text-align: justify;">
517. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Text one
518. states that an engulfment of tourists causes problems in a variety of aspects.
519. One of them is the rubbish people leave behind on the beaches <u>or elsewhere in
520. nature</u>. Cities and villages are jam-packed with cars and other vehicles as well
521. as public buildings are crammed with itinerants. Last but not least is the
522. alteration of jobs of the local inhabitants. All this could be a problem
523. although it also could have benefits. Newly started jobs like cleaners, tour
524. guides, public transport drivers and hotel employees are examples of how to
525. turn the downside into a positive view. Therefore an open-mind set is needed. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Check "engulfment of tourists", never heard that before. "...elsewhere in nature" seems like your vocabulary repertoire is limited. I also see the task is full of advanced vocabulary while your text is rather simple).</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
526. <div class="MsoNoSpacing" style="text-align: justify;">
527. <br /></div>
528. <div class="MsoNoSpacing" style="text-align: justify;">
529. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">Text two
530. mentions that before touristic spots turn into enticing places they are first
531. negatively developed because of the damage tourists can cause. The amelioration
532. of such places has most of the time more to do with the public view rather than
533. with an long-lasting improvement. In my opinion, the focus should be on a
534. long-term policy which attracts more holidaymakers in the future. This will
535. enhance the sustainability of a touristic area.<span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;"> (Consider re-writing the paragraph. I don't think it summurises the essence of text two)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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538. <div class="MsoNoSpacing" style="text-align: justify;">
539. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB;">In conclusion,
540. where travellers pay a visit to a specific region during the same period this
541. can lead to certain difficulties. When the locals have a growth-mind set they
542. are able to tackle these problems. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Way too vague!)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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551. <div style="text-align: justify;">
552. Dear John, I am sorry to say that you need to step it up ! Best regards and the best of luck in the exam!</div>
553. </content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/6640764814779291486/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/02/cpe-essay-on-unsustainable-tourism.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/6640764814779291486'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/6640764814779291486'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/02/cpe-essay-on-unsustainable-tourism.html' title='CPE Essay on unsustainable tourism'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiBvBYRV3-AYAFk1E0hikLDmQ5fUxS8tKfLdqdJ-ye95XCySxorv40QIwhybnrPQGSqk5IOwJDIdCBFlYbivMmdbWPGe4Ep8I5-kbvl8k1hHMlN3aCZ85rEM_wIGV80Xg2ZPVUQDYH8mYA/s72-c/Writing+essay.jpeg" height="72" width="72"/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-8590559501729657971</id><published>2019-02-25T01:49:00.002-08:00</published><updated>2019-02-25T01:49:35.179-08:00</updated><title type='text'>CAE Letter to a friend</title><content type='html'>&lt;h3 style=&quot;background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;&quot;&gt;
554. <span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="font-size: small;">Hallo everybody, this time I have a post from Clemente, who is taking the CAE exam next month. I find his sample very well-written and an excellent example of an effective use of idioms in informal writing. </span></span></h3>
555. <div>
556. <b><br /></b></div>
557. <h3 style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
558. <b><span style="font-size: small;">Writing task</span></b></h3>
559. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
560. <br /></div>
561. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
562. You have received a letter from an English friend:</div>
563. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
564. <br /></div>
565. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
566. My new job is great, and next month I get to travel on business. Guess what - I'm actually coming to your town for a week! I'll be free some evenings and one weekend. I want to make the most of this opportunity, so I'd like your advice please: where to go, what to do, and why?</div>
567. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
568. Cheers,</div>
569. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
570. Chris</div>
571. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
572. <br /></div>
573. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
574. Write your letter in reply. You do not need to include postal addresses.</div>
575. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
576. """</div>
577. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
578. <br /></div>
579. <div style="background-color: white; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: right;">
580. <span style="color: red;">Feedback in red</span></div>
581. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
582. <br /></div>
583. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
584. <br /></div>
585. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
586. <br /></div>
587. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
588. Dear Chris</div>
589. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
590. <br /></div>
591. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
592. It's so nice to hear from you! Congrats on the new opportunity that you have to travel on business. You know, the moment I read you were coming to my town, I went like "OMG, that's brilliant!". I'm chuffed to bits, truly! I hope we can get to spend some time together to catch up and chew the fat.</div>
593. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
594. <br /></div>
595. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
596. Anyway, while you are here, you can't miss <i>Areadocks</i>; I'm sure you will have a ball there. <i>Areadocks</i> is a really fancy pub right in the centre of the city, where everybody is always dressed to kill and the food is absolutely scrumptious! I mean, you're a foodie and always very elegantly dressed, so this is your place, man. You must give <i>Areadocks</i> a go!</div>
597. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
598. <br /></div>
599. <div style="background-color: white; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
600. <span style="color: #222222;">Also, you may want to check out the big bookshop near the main theatre of the city. For a bookworm like you, <i>Libraccio</i> is</span><span style="color: red;"> unmissable</span><span style="color: #222222;">. I bet you'll feel like in a fairy tale when you enter </span><i style="color: #222222;">Libraccio</i><span style="color: #222222;">. You're going to find tons of books - both new and second-hand - which are not very expensive. The staff there is incredibly friendly and competent. I mean, ok, if you work in a bookshop you should know about books, right? But mate, the people who work there are not human! The second you tell them you're looking for this or that title, they start giving you loads of facts on the book, the author, the plot, the characters, AND the publishing house, too! UNBELIEVABLE! </span><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Consider checking if ""unmissable" works well there)</span></div>
601. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
602. <br /></div>
603. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
604. All right, I guess that's all for now. Please do let me know when you arrive here so we can meet up somewhere.</div>
605. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
606. Looking forward to seeing you, mate!</div>
607. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
608. <br /></div>
609. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; text-align: justify;">
610. Take care,</div>
611. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
612. Clemente</div>
613. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
614. <br /></div>
615. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">
616. (279 words)</div>
617. </content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/8590559501729657971/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/02/cae-letter-to-friend.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/8590559501729657971'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/8590559501729657971'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2019/02/cae-letter-to-friend.html' title='CAE Letter to a friend'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-7813044290997243612</id><published>2019-02-23T01:20:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2019-02-23T01:26:28.616-08:00</updated><title type='text'>CAE Essay on &quot;who should receive the money?&quot;</title><content type='html'>&lt;br /&gt;
618. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
619. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">Hallo zusammen! I just received a message from Clemente, who is taking the CAE exam next month. Here there is the essay that he sent me, together with some feedback in red.</span></div>
620. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
621. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"><br /></span></div>
622. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
623. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"><br /></span></div>
624. <h3 style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
625. <b>Writing Task</b></h3>
626. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
627. <br /></div>
628. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
629. <a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgJHeEwDrXQEVhI3R9Q0jNO79gyDcBgfd3J8QL_YFEnfetnzvZ3HF8agFM-Oecvu2Duij_zSyHVf2qo2BL8tgQhDYrzBrIzRiqRY2yUJK0jkK-Hg7hzQ6cWpdqRWe0gDEFNuoPhB30yW84/s1600/mus.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="183" data-original-width="275" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgJHeEwDrXQEVhI3R9Q0jNO79gyDcBgfd3J8QL_YFEnfetnzvZ3HF8agFM-Oecvu2Duij_zSyHVf2qo2BL8tgQhDYrzBrIzRiqRY2yUJK0jkK-Hg7hzQ6cWpdqRWe0gDEFNuoPhB30yW84/s1600/mus.jpg" /></a><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">WHICH FACILITIES SHOULD RECEIVE MONEY FROM LOCAL
630. AUTHORITIES?<o:p></o:p></span></div>
631. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
632. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"><br /></span></div>
633. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
634. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">- Museums<o:p></o:p></span></div>
635. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
636. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">- Sports centres<o:p></o:p></span></div>
637. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
638. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">- Public gardens<o:p></o:p></span></div>
639. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
640. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"><br /></span></div>
641. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
642. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">SOME OPINIONS EXPRESSED IN THE DISCUSSION<o:p></o:p></span></div>
643. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
644. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"><br /></span></div>
645. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
646. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">Museums aren't popular with everybody!<o:p></o:p></span></div>
647. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
648. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">Sports centre mean healthier people.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
649. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
650. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">A town needs green spaces - parks are great for
651. everybody<o:p></o:p></span></div>
652. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
653. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">Write an essay discussing two of the facilities in
654. your notes. You should explain which facility it is more important for local
655. authorities to give money to, giving reasons in support of your answer.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
656. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
657. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">You may, if you wish, make use of the opinions
658. expressed in the discussion, but you should use your own words as far as
659. possible.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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661. <br /></div>
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663. <br /></div>
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665. <br /></div>
666. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
667. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">Here's the essay.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
668. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
669. <br /></div>
670. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
671. <br /></div>
672. <h2 style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
673. <span style="background: white; color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">       
674.                      
675.            MONEY, MONEY, MONEY</span></h2>
676. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
677. <br /></div>
678. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
679. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">In today's world, hardly a day goes by <strike>when we do
680. not hear</strike> without us hearing of recreational centres such as clubs, cinemas or amusement parks
681. being provided with plenty of money in order to offer the best services on the
682. market. </span><span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">However, are these the only facilities which should
683. receive money? </span><span style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Is it so? where? who provides the money? how much? why?)</span></span></div>
684. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
685. <br /></div>
686. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
687. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">First and foremost, I feel local authorities ought
688. to consider the invaluable role museums play: a museum is the only way we have
689. to dive into our past, our history, our forebear's way of life. Unfortunately,
690. we - victims of an "e-world", where what we used to watch in fantasy
691. movies has now become reality - are beginning to drift away from these precious
692. facilities.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
693. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
694. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">However, to my mind, museums should receive money
695. so as to draw more and more people with a view to learning and becoming
696. familiar with ancient cultures and traditions.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Not sure if museums are "the only way" to dive into our past, but I think you can find a better argument, and maybe mention the world "children" somewhere).</span></span></div>
697. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
698. <br /></div>
699. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
700. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">On the other hand, green spaces are losing their
701. appeal, as well. Some public gardens, unfortunately, have now become a sad
702. depiction of people's inconsiderateness towards nature: places filled with plastic,
703. cigarette butts and little ponds full of everything but clear water and lovely
704. fish. </span><span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">I strongly believe local authorities ought to
705. provide public gardens with funds<u> in order to render them clean and appealing</u>
706. for tourists, as well as for the people who go jogging or those who simply wish
707. to recharge their batteries and escape from the hustle and bustle of everyday
708. life. </span><span style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Check grammar there. Maybe also use words like "sustainability" or "global.warming"...) </span></span></div>
709. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
710. <br /></div>
711. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
712. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">All in all, if I were a member of a city council, I
713. would undoubtedly give priority to museums; I would endeavour to try and start new
714. stimulating projects, as these centres allow us to go on terrific tours of our
715. history, thanks to which we can learn a lot about our origins and how we have
716. reached our modern era. </span><span style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Well...it doenst make much sense. In the last paragraph you said we need to save parks and in the end you recommend giving the money to the museum. Make up your mind!)</span></span></div>
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724. <span style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">If you have a writing to submitt please hurry up! The CAE and CPE exam are coming soon!</span></div>
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726. <span style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">Remember you can contact me now also on social media! That is true, I am going techy. :)</span></div>
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737. With the CPE exam coming soon, I have started to receive some emails asking for help. Well, I am glad to give you a hand! </div>
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742. The following CPE sample was submitted by Donato. In the following lines you can see the task, the writing and some <span style="color: red;">feedback in colour red.</span></div>
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754. <b>Shifting sands: behavioural change</b> </div>
755. <div>
756. <div style="text-align: justify;">
757. Nowadays, in some cultures there may often be confusion between generations about what is <br />
758. acceptable behaviour in certain situations. Older people sometimes complain, for example, about the real or imagined rudeness of others, such as in the use of electronic devices in public places. However, the younger generation do not regard electronic communication as intrusive, but rather as fundamental to their way of life. Only increased mutual understanding is likely to resolve potential conflict or confusion in any society. In this case, as in all others, it pays to be aware of other people’s points of view. </div>
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762. <b>Follow my leader? </b></div>
763. <div style="text-align: justify;">
764. Should we always aim to do what society expects of us? No, what society needs is individuality. Worrying about what other people think inhibits enthusiasm and creativity. Nothing new is ever achieved by conforming to expected social norms. This is not only true for society’s innovators: everybody needs a strong sense of their own worth as an individual. This is essential for psychological well-being and the ability to function effectively in one’s personal and professional life. Paying too much attention to society’s conventions can be counter-productive in these and other ways.  </div>
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773. <b>Essay on conventions imposed by society</b></h2>
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779. Both texts deal with the modern issue of conventions imposed by society. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Is this your introduction, half a line? too short!)</span></div>
780. <div>
781. <br /></div>
782. <div style="text-align: justify;">
783. The first text emphasises the gap between what was considered socially acceptable some years ago and the current trends. For instance, walking about with your eyes glued to a monitor is commonplace nowadays, but older generations who have had a different upbringing consider it contemptible. This leads to misunderstandings and, in the worst case scenario, even to conflicts. The only way to prevent such phenomena is to raise awareness of other people’s points of view and respect them.<span style="font-size: x-small;"> <span style="color: red;">(Somehow I don't like the use of theverb "emphasise" in the first sentence.  Maybe a preposition is missing? </span></span><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">Pls check on that.</span><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">)</span></div>
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786. <div style="text-align: justify;">
787. Conversely, the author of the second text champions individualism and highlights how crucial it is to innovation. If we were always expected to play by an extremely strict set of rules, our creativity and critical thinking skills would be stifled and no progress would come of this. Furthermore, the text makes particular mention of the benefits that thinking with our own mind can have on our mental well-being and career. <span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Crucial to or crucial for? I believe it is crucial for + noun)</span></div>
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790. <div>
791. Living in the era of globalization, we have to come to terms with the world views of people from all walks of life and, therefore, it is imperative that we exert some of the tolerance mentioned in the first text. However, this does not have to happen at the expense of our own individuality which we have to nurture and preserve. Being ourselves when we are in a private environment and observing social norms when we are in public is surely a good compromise that will enhance the quality of our lives in the long term.</div>
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812. <br />
813. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><br /></span>
814. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><b>Writing task</b></span><br />
815. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><br /></span>
816. <br />
817. <div style="text-align: justify;">
818. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">A job fair was recently held in your town for
819. international organizations and companies to promote careers available for
820. young people. You have been asked to write a report of the jobs fair for your
821. college website. You should briefly describe the event and identify two or
822. three promotions of particular interest and relevance. You should also evaluate
823. the extent to which such events can open young people’s minds to new challenges
824. and career opportunities. Write your <strong><span style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">report</span></strong>.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
825. <div style="text-align: justify;">
826. <br /></div>
827. <div style="text-align: justify;">
828. <span style="color: red;">                                                                                                                    </span> Text submitted by Edoardo. </div>
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831. <div style="text-align: justify;">
832. <span style="color: red;">                                                                                                                              Feedback in red</span></div>
833. <strong><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><br /></span></strong>
834. <br />
835. <div style="text-align: center;">
836. <strong><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Report on the jobs fair in Fulham</span></strong><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
837. <div style="text-align: center;">
838. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><br /></span></u></div>
839. <div style="text-align: left;">
840. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Introduction</span></u></div>
841. <div style="text-align: justify;">
842. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">The aim of this report is to discuss the jobs fair
843. that is yearly held in the Borough of Fulham, evaluating the <strike>important</strike> role it
844. plays on young people’s career choices. </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Intro is too short. I would erase the word "important" because it sounds like a conclusion)</span><span style="color: #222222;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
845. <div style="text-align: justify;">
846. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><br /></span></u></div>
847. <div style="text-align: justify;">
848. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><br /></span></u></div>
849. <div style="text-align: justify;">
850. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">The event</span></u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
851. <div style="text-align: justify;">
852. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Following the task I was given by my college, I have
853. written this report to bring into focus the main features of this acclaimed
854. jobs fair which only came to an end last Saturday. The event was originally
855. designed to tackle youth-related unemployment <u>with the objective to</u> bringing
856. its percentage down to 23% in the next two years. Not only does it entail an
857. assistance team which offers one-to-one consultation sessions with an expert
858. during the week, but it also made arrangements for individual job interviews
859. with well-known organisation chiefs who are intended to hire new teenagers. </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(Check grammar: with the objective to... )</span></span></div>
860. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><br /></span></u>
861. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Eye peak on the fair</span></u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><o:p></o:p></span><br />
862. <div style="text-align: justify;">
863. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">The event offered multiple job opportunities in
864. several sectors, ranging from the transportation to the marketing business. The
865. food industry deserves a particular mention due to the enormous exhibitions
866. regarding the history of the most common aliments and their production methods.
867. The beauty field also offered one-day massage courses for aspiring
868. aestheticians. Given the high quality standard of the jobs fair, I decided to
869. attend it for a day and interview some of the visitors to ask for their
870. opinion. What emerged from this survey is presented in the following paragraph.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
871. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><br /></span></u>
872. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Popularity of the jobs fair</span></u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><o:p></o:p></span><br />
873. <div style="text-align: justify;">
874. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Due to their limitative policy of job offers for the
875. youth, most of the visitors turned out to be between the age of 18 and 25.
876. Nonetheless, a remarkable figure of younger people were present that day,
877. claiming their high interest in discovering more about employment orientation
878. and upcoming careers. Most of the interviewees stated to have changed their
879. views on the job world thanks to the event, however a small number of them made
880. complaints about the numerous crowd which impeeded a smooth flow of people at
881. times.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(I would change the title for "survey on popularity of the job fair")</span></span></div>
882. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><br /></span></u>
883. <u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Conclusion</span></u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><o:p></o:p></span><br />
884. <div style="text-align: justify;">
885. <span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Clearly, such events draw the young public’s
886. attention, which is more and more on their first job opportunities that will
887. guide them into the professional world, and due to the positive feedback of the
888. fair, I would recommend its reiteration in the coming years. </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: x-small;">(I would not use the word "clearly". Check the first and second lines, they don't make much sense).</span></span></div>
889. <div style="text-align: justify;">
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891. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><br /></span>
892. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;">Edoardo</span><br />
893. <div class="MsoNormal">
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/></a><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;"><span style="color: #222222;"><span style="color: #4d4d4d;"><span style="background: rgb(242, 242, 239);">Dear
898. Gustavo,</span></span></span><span style="color: #222222;">I
899. hope you can help me by correcting one of my essays, as I am taking
900. the CPE next week.</span></span></h2>
901. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm;">
902. <span style="color: #282828;"><span style="font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, </span></span><span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions.</span></div>
903. <br />
904. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm;">
905. <span style="color: #282828;"><span style="font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">My answer:</span></span></div>
906. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0.5cm; orphans: 2; widows: 2;">
907. <br /></div>
908. <h3 class="western" style="border: none; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: 150%; margin-bottom: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; orphans: 2; padding: 0cm; text-align: center; widows: 2;">
909. <span style="color: #222222;"><span style="font-family: inherit;"><span style="font-size: large;">An Opinion Essay (CPE Exam): </span></span></span></h3>
910. <h3 class="western" style="border: none; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: 150%; margin-bottom: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; orphans: 2; padding: 0cm; text-align: center; widows: 2;">
911. <span style="color: #222222;"><span style="font-family: inherit;"><span style="font-size: large;">Teenagers in my country</span></span></span></h3>
912. <div>
913. <span style="color: #222222;"><span style="font-family: inherit;"><span style="font-size: large;"><br /></span></span></span></div>
914. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; text-align: right; widows: 2;">
915. <span style="color: blue;">Feedback in blue. A couple of words were added.</span></div>
916. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; text-align: justify; widows: 2;">
917. <br /></div>
918. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; text-align: justify; widows: 2;">
919. <span style="font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="color: #282828;">There
920. are a lot of negative opinions out there, when it comes to </span><span style="color: blue;">the </span><span style="color: #282828;">younger
921. generation. Some people claim they are too dependent on technology,
922. as they are often seen spending a lot of time on their smartphones,
923. even sometimes choosing online communication over real one. </span></span></span><span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">Additionally, there have been <strike>instances</strike> cases of older people speaking
924. against </span><span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">teenagers' <strike>habit of</strike> being too sensitive and taking offence in
925. everything.</span></div>
926. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; text-align: justify; widows: 2;">
927. <span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;"></span><br />
928. <a name='more'></a><span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
929. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; text-align: justify; widows: 2;">
930. <span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">However, when you look at the history of mankind, you are
931. likely to find many <strike>instances </strike>cases of older generation </span><span style="color: blue; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">members </span><span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;">disliking something
932. about the new one. As a result, it makes me wonder if the
933. criticism we're so eager to express is just a form of resisting
934. any sort of change, or maybe even progress.</span></div>
935. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; text-align: justify; widows: 2;">
936. <span style="color: #282828; font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
937. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; text-align: justify; widows: 2;">
938. <span style="color: #282828;"><span style="font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: small;"><strike>On
939. the other hand,</strike> There is evidence of the new generation being
940. affected by technology in a good way as well, making them more
941. connected and more engaged both socially and politically. Moreover,
942. technological advancements make various education tools available to
943. them, making it possible for younger people to learn about this world
944. without having to go to the library. This leads to a yearly increase
945. in young people getting higher education, and therefore benefits our
946. society in a significant way. In addition to that, it is my opinion
947. that in being 'too sensitive' the new generation is examining the
948. existing societal norms and trying to be more inclusive, promoting
949. diversity and individuality. </span></span></span></div>
950. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; text-align: justify; widows: 2;">
951. <span style="color: #282828;"><span style="font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: small;"><br /></span></span></span></div>
952. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; text-align: justify; widows: 2;">
953. <span style="font-family: "open sans" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="color: #282828;">So
954. what can we do in order to come together despite or obvious personal
955. differences? It is my belief that there should be a step in the
956. direction of an open-minded and constructive conversation and even
957. discussion from both sides. By engaging in a respectful interaction,
958. we might be able to show each other that our world-views don't need
959. to be defined by our age. As a matter a fact, </span><strike style="color: #282828;">trying to show</strike><span style="color: #282828;"> </span><span style="color: blue;">highlighting</span><span style="color: #282828;"> the
960. benefits of technology, instead of focusing on the negative
961. aspects, might end up bringing both generations closer together.</span></span></span></div>
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963. </div>
964. <div style="text-align: justify;">
965. <br /></div>
966. <br />
967. <br />
968. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; widows: 2;">
969. <br /></div>
970. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; widows: 2;">
971. <span style="color: #222222;"><span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">Thank
972. you in advance.</span></span></span></div>
973. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; widows: 2;">
974. <span style="color: #222222;"><span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">Best
975. Regards,</span></span></span></div>
976. <div style="font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; widows: 2;">
977. <span style="color: #222222;"><span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: small;">Jeka</span></span></span></div>
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981. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-weight: normal;">D</span><span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-weight: normal;">ear Gustavo,</span></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;"><span style="font-weight: normal;">I hope this email finds you well. My name is José V - I am sitting the CPE in three</span></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;"><span style="font-weight: normal;"> weeks'</span></span><span style="font-size: small; font-weight: normal;"> time, so I was wondering if you could have a look at my writing task. Massive thanks for your hard work; I have been following your website for a while now and, in all honesty, it is a treasure trove of fantastic materials!</span></h2>
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983. <a href="about:invalid#zClosurez" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"></a><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;"><br />Kind regards,<br />José V</span></span></h2>
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989. <a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjzqdz_nEj3fzsha1nKJBd4Ost_4x1lsijL9T11IEqcLVCBZI1O10JOuVUKV06u1JS6N72y_Csk-3MBBY-7WWfZPEHaZUaIn3fAqBBWK0Ldi6VgBIEj7z2cZD88bewF2RoLBtGc8l31-_M/s1600/stress.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><br /><img border="0" data-original-height="544" data-original-width="573" height="377" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjzqdz_nEj3fzsha1nKJBd4Ost_4x1lsijL9T11IEqcLVCBZI1O10JOuVUKV06u1JS6N72y_Csk-3MBBY-7WWfZPEHaZUaIn3fAqBBWK0Ldi6VgBIEj7z2cZD88bewF2RoLBtGc8l31-_M/s400/stress.png" width="400" /></a></div>
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991. <span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;"><br /></span></span></div>
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993. <h3 style="text-align: center;">
994. The Financial cost of Stress</h3>
995. </div>
996. <div>
997. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;">
998. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 200%;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">It is an
999. indisputable fact that stress has become a prominent issue in present-day
1000. society. People from different demographics claim to suffer from mental unrest
1001. on a daily basis; a state of affairs that has led organisations to realise the
1002. importance of dealing with it. The two texts discuss the intricacies of the
1003. problem alongside some ways in which it can be <span style="color: red;">combatted</span>.<span style="color: red;"> (Would prefer a different verb)</span><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1004. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;">
1005. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 200%;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red;"></span></span></span><br />
1006. <a name='more'></a><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 200%;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red;"><br /></span></span></span></div>
1007. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;">
1008. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 200%;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">The first text
1009. explores the negative effects stress can have on businesses – affecting both
1010. employees and, ultimately, the companies themselves. The author argues that
1011. stress can cause a wide range of ailments amongst the workforce, resulting in
1012. financial losses. Employers are urged to become better informed of
1013. psychological issues to tackle them more effectively. While I wholeheartedly
1014. agree that there should be more emphasis placed on mental illnesses, I believe
1015. that attention should be diverted from mere financial matters. Instead, we
1016. should investigate the reasons why employees suffer from such problems in an
1017. ambience that should, at least on principle, be harmless. <o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1018. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;">
1019. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 200%;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"></span></span><br />
1020. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 200%;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></span></div>
1021. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;">
1022. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 200%;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">In the second
1023. text, the writer fervently emphasises the benefits of opening up about stress
1024. and other <span style="color: red;">mental issues</span>. <span style="color: red;">(Is stress a "mental issue"?)</span> Readers are encouraged to explore avenues to
1025. ameliorate their well-being; likewise, we are reminded that there is nothing
1026. shameful about requesting assistance. Our appearance-obsessed society is
1027. configured in such a way that even the slightest whiff of psychological
1028. introspection is bound to raise eyebrows – this text, however, hammers
1029. interesting points home and reminds us that our emotional stability must be
1030. prioritised. <o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1031. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;">
1032. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 200%;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></span></div>
1033. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;">
1034. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 200%;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">All things
1035. considered, both texts raise interesting subjects and urge readers to reflect
1036. on a still largely overlooked situation. Be it for the sake of commercial or
1037. personal growth, it is imperative that institutions strive to normalise the
1038. existence of psychological disorders. Once the stigma has been lifted, we will
1039. finally be able to walk hand in hand towards a better future.<o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1040. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 200%; text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;">
1041. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; line-height: 200%;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">(307 words)</span><span style="font-family: "times new roman" , serif;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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1043. </content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/6463337074384527681/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/11/cpe-exam-writing-task-financial-cost-of.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/6463337074384527681'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/6463337074384527681'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/11/cpe-exam-writing-task-financial-cost-of.html' title='CPE Cambridge Exam. Essay on &quot;The financial cost of stress&quot; '/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjzqdz_nEj3fzsha1nKJBd4Ost_4x1lsijL9T11IEqcLVCBZI1O10JOuVUKV06u1JS6N72y_Csk-3MBBY-7WWfZPEHaZUaIn3fAqBBWK0Ldi6VgBIEj7z2cZD88bewF2RoLBtGc8l31-_M/s72-c/stress.png" height="72" width="72"/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-3123648802851720097</id><published>2018-10-11T05:02:00.002-07:00</published><updated>2018-12-01T04:49:14.580-08:00</updated><title type='text'>CPE Cambridge Exam: Essay on Sports and Teenagers</title><content type='html'>&lt;h2&gt;
1044. </h2>
1045. <h2 style="text-align: justify;">
1046. <a href="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRKdsD0D6BWXOu3c96KA2ePMwwiB98w0o16fL0XyyY3kveNghz4" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img alt="Ð\x9aаÑ\x80Ñ\x82инки по запÑ\x80оÑ\x81Ñ\x83 sport at school" border="0" src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRKdsD0D6BWXOu3c96KA2ePMwwiB98w0o16fL0XyyY3kveNghz4" /></a><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Hello Gustavo:</span></span></span></h2>
1047. <h2 style="text-align: justify;">
1048. <span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">I have made an essay taking this example and I would really</span> appreciate if you could check it and let me know if I am getting closer to doing one properly. I know it´s too long(I have to work on this issue) but I hope there are not that many mistakes...thanks a lot.</span></span></h2>
1049. <span style="font-family: trebuchet ms, sans-serif; font-size: small;"><div style="text-align: justify;">
1050. Task</div>
1051. </span><div class="gmail_quote">
1052. <div id="m_-9066680205747281169m_8843363052081131335emailbody" style="font-family: Georgia, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; line-height: 18.2px; margin: 0px 2em;">
1053. <table id="m_-9066680205747281169m_8843363052081131335itemcontentlist"><tbody>
1054. <tr><td style="line-height: 1.4em; margin: 0px;"><div style="font-size: 13px; line-height: 18.2px; margin: 0px;">
1055. <h2 style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: Georgia, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif;">
1056. <span style="font-size: x-small;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></span></h2>
1057. <div>
1058. <span style="font-size: xx-small;"><table border="1" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="m_-9066680205747281169m_8843363052081131335MsoNormalTable" style="background: rgb(217, 237, 247); border-collapse: collapse; border: none; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms", sans-serif; width: 555px;"><tbody>
1059. <tr><td style="border: 1pt solid rgb(221, 221, 221); font-family: Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; margin: 0px; padding: 6pt;" valign="top"><div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0px 0px 15pt; text-align: justify;">
1060. <span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #333333; font-family: "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: 10.5pt;">Raising the Bar or School Sports<br />The National Sports Academy is running a series of workshops aimed at encouraging more teenagers to get involved in sport. The workshops are for teachers and will look at how to promote the numerous benefits of physical exercise and team sports to school pupils. 'Exercise helps to maintain a stable weight, strengthen bones and reduces the risk of stress-related illnesses.' explained Tim Collins, the Academy Director. 'Aside from health benefits taking part in competitive sports gives teenagers a chance to experience the highs and lows of a competition, as well as instilling discipline, responsibility and commitment - all valuable life skills.'<u></u><u></u></span></div>
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1062. </tbody></table>
1063. </span><br />
1064. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background-color: white; font-family: "trebuchet ms", sans-serif; font-size: medium; line-height: normal; margin: 0px 0px 0.0001pt; text-align: justify;">
1065. <span style="font-size: xx-small;"><br /></span></div>
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1069. <span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #333333; font-family: "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: 10.5pt;">Sport Seen as Uncool<br />teenagers are spending less time on physical exercise because they find it deeply 'uncool', according to a survey of teachers and pupils. The problem is most prevalent amongst older teenagers. Girls are uncomfortable about sharing sports classes with boys and avoid swimming lessons because of a fear that it will spoil their hairstyles. And both sexes were scathing in the survey about the unfashionable PE uniform that had to be worn. The choice of sports available was also too limited. Teachers said they would like to see codes for sports kits relaxed, single sex physical education classes and a wider range of activities to combat the decline in activity.<u></u><u></u></span></div>
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1071. </tbody></table>
1072. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; font-family: "trebuchet ms", sans-serif; font-size: medium; line-height: normal; margin: 0px 0px 7.5pt; text-align: justify;">
1073. <span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #333333; font-family: "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: 10.5pt;">Write the essay. (around 240 - 280 words)<u></u><u></u></span></div>
1074. <div class="m_-9066680205747281169m_8843363052081131335MsoNoSpacing" style="background-color: white; font-size: medium; text-align: right;">
1075. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1076. <div class="m_-9066680205747281169m_8843363052081131335MsoNoSpacing" style="background-color: white; font-size: medium; text-align: justify;">
1077. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1078. <div class="m_-9066680205747281169m_8843363052081131335MsoNoSpacing" style="background-color: white; font-size: medium; text-align: right;">
1079. <span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Feedback in red</span></div>
1080. <div class="m_-9066680205747281169m_8843363052081131335MsoNoSpacing" style="background-color: white; font-size: medium; text-align: justify;">
1081. <h3 style="text-align: center;">
1082. <span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">DIFFICULT
1083. TIMES FOR SPORTS AT SCHOOLS</span></span></h3>
1084. <div class="MsoNormal">
1085. <div style="text-align: center;">
1086. <br /></div>
1087. </div>
1088. <div class="MsoNormal">
1089. <span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Sports at
1090. school seem to be unappealing for most of teenagers <strike>at this day and age</strike>. This
1091. essay will <strike>explore into</strike> summarise and discuss two texts whose concern is how to make <strike>them</strike> young feel
1092. attracted to it and explore why they aren´t. <span style="color: red;">(Keep intro short, 4 lines ideal)</span> </span></span></div>
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1094. <span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"></span></span><br />
1095. <a name='more'></a><span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></span></div>
1096. <div class="MsoNormal">
1097. <span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">The first
1098. text states that teenagers are less interested in sports nowadays. <span style="color: red;">(Repetitive) </span>For that
1099. reason the National Sports Academy promotes workshops for teachers to learn how
1100. to develop a taste for sports in young students, pointing both its physical
1101. benefits and life skills derived from competition. <span style="color: red;">(Make paragraph longer + add opinion)</span><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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1103. <span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></span></div>
1104. <div class="MsoNormal">
1105. <span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">The second
1106. text<strike>, on the other hand,</strike> focuses its attention on the reasons that lie behind
1107. this unappeal for sports. The main problem seems to be the shyness boys and
1108. girls feel when sharing a sports class. They feel self-conscious due to the
1109. compulsory uniform or because their looks are going to be spoilt, therefore,
1110. they avoid these classes in order to remain fashionable and cool. Teachers have
1111. proposed single sex classes and more activities to save the decline of sports </span></span></div>
1112. <div class="MsoNormal">
1113. <span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">practice at schools. <span style="color: red;">(Add own comment/opinion)</span><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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1115. <span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></span></div>
1116. <div class="MsoNormal">
1117. <span lang="EN-US"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">My opinion
1118. is that sports have always been a torture for some people <span style="color: red;">(why?)</span>, let alone teenagers
1119. who are in constant denial to anything that might be given as a health benefit. <span style="color: red;">(Make this paragraph a conclusion)</span></span></span></div>
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1133. </div>
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/></a><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Hello Gustavo </span><span style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">I send you my writing. If there is any problem I would be grateful if you let me know. </span></span><span style="font-size: small;"><br /><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Claustre</span></span></span></h2>
1137. <h2 style="background-color: white; color: #222222; text-align: start;">
1138. <span style="font-size: small; font-weight: normal;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Thanking you in advance, </span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></span></h2>
1139. <b style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms", sans-serif; text-align: justify;"><br /></b>
1140. <b style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms", sans-serif; text-align: justify;"><br /></b>
1141. <b style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms", sans-serif; text-align: justify;"><br /></b>
1142. <b style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms", sans-serif; text-align: justify;">Task type: Proposal (English level B2)</b><br />
1143. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"></span><br />
1144. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">
1145. </span>
1146. <br />
1147. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1148. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="font-weight: 700;"><br /></span></span></div>
1149. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">
1150. <span lang="es-ES"></span></span>
1151. <br />
1152. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1153. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES"><b>Question:</b></span></span><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES"> You
1154. work in the sales department of a large company. You have been asked
1155. to reply to this memo from the company's Personnel Officer:</span></span></span></span></div>
1156. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">
1157. </span></span>
1158. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1159. <br /></div>
1160. <div style="background: #cee3f6; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
1161. </div>
1162. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1163. <b style="color: #333333;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Internal
1164. Memo</span></b></div>
1165. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"></span><br />
1166. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1167. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">From:
1168. Personnel Officer</span></div>
1169. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">
1170. <span lang="es-ES"></span></span>
1171. <br />
1172. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1173. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">To: Sales Department</span></span></div>
1174. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">
1175. </span></span>
1176. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1177. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><br /></span></span></div>
1178. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">
1179. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1180. Owing to recent
1181. changes within the company we are experiencing some problems with
1182. staff motivation. Please write a proposal giving your opinion of the
1183. following suggestions for improving staff morale:</div>
1184. </span></span><br />
1185. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1186. <br /></div>
1187. <ol>
1188. <li><div style="background: rgb(206, 227, 246); margin-bottom: 0.18cm; margin-top: 0.18cm; text-align: justify;">
1189. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">A
1190. party for the whole department.</span></span></div>
1191. </li>
1192. <li><div style="background: rgb(206, 227, 246); margin-bottom: 0.18cm; margin-top: 0.18cm; text-align: justify;">
1193. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">A
1194. weekend away for the most successful sales team.</span></span></div>
1195. </li>
1196. <li><div style="background: rgb(206, 227, 246); margin-bottom: 0.18cm; margin-top: 0.18cm; text-align: justify;">
1197. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">A
1198. monetary prize for the best salesperson.</span></span></div>
1199. </li>
1200. </ol>
1201. <div style="background: rgb(206, 227, 246); margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1202. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES">I
1203. would appreciate any other suggestions.</span></span></div>
1204. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1205. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES"><br /></span></span></span>
1206. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES">Write
1207. the </span></span><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES"><b>proposal</b></span></span><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES"> to
1208. the Personnel Officer. (between 220-260 words)</span></span></span></div>
1209. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1210. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br />
1211. </span></div>
1212. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1213. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br />
1214. </span></div>
1215. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: center;">
1216. <h3>
1217. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><b>Proposal on Staff Morale</b></span></h3>
1218. </div>
1219. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1220. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1221. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1222. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES">This
1223. proposal is intended to highlight the current problem with  staff
1224. motivation in our company and <strike>give </strike>provide some ideas on how to improve  that issue.
1225. </span></span>
1226. </span></div>
1227. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1228. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br />
1229. </span></div>
1230. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1231. <span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><u>STAFF MOTIVATION PROBLEMS</u></span></div>
1232. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1233. <span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Add a paragraph here and explain what the problem is.</span></div>
1234. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1235. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><br /></span></span></div>
1236. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1237. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><u>A
1238. PARTY FOR A WHOLE DEPARTMENT</u></span></span></div>
1239. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1240. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br />
1241. </span></div>
1242. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1243. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><span style="color: #333333;">I
1244. believe that could be  a good option to improve relationships between
1245. people of different departments and consequently straighten up the link
1246. with all members of the company. </span><span style="color: red;">Nevertheless, in an expensive option (check)</span><span style="color: #333333;">
1247. although the results might be satisfactoy.</span></span></span></div>
1248. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1249. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"></span><br />
1250. <a name='more'></a><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br />
1251. </span></div>
1252. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1253. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"></span></div>
1254. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span>
1255. <br />
1256. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1257. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><u><span style="color: #333333;">A
1258. WEEKEND AWAY FOR THE MOST SUCCES</span><span style="color: red;">S</span><span style="color: #333333;">FUL SALES TEAM</span></u></span></span></div>
1259. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1260. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br />
1261. </span></div>
1262. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1263. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: #333333;"><span lang="es-ES">I
1264. am  of the opinion that encouraging employees to achive high
1265. objectives is a good way to improve   the benefits of the company but
1266. I also believe that this could contribute to create tension between
1267. departments and the overall cosecuences could be not as good as we
1268. expected. </span></span>
1269. </span></div>
1270. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1271. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br />
1272. </span></div>
1273. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1274. <span style="color: #333333; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><u>A
1275. MONETARY PRIZE FOR THE BEST SALESPERSON</u></span></span></div>
1276. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1277. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br />
1278. </span></div>
1279. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1280. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><span style="color: #333333;">My
1281. viewpont of this option is that this might  create discrepances
1282. between employees. Furthermore, will discourage the spirit of
1283. co-operation tha our company strives for. Despite  that,  is probably
1284. the most economocical of the options. </span><span style="color: red;">(So what do you propose instead?)</span></span></span></div>
1285. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1286. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br />
1287. </span></div>
1288. <div lang="es-ES" style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1289. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><u>CONCLUSION</u></span></div>
1290. <div style="margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1291. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="es-ES"><span style="color: #333333;">On
1292. balance</span><span style="color: red;"> I would  be decided (check)</span><span style="color: #333333;">  for the party despite the fact that is
1293. the most expensive option because I strongly believe that  coud be an
1294. excelent way to  improve employees motivation and also encourage
1295. relationships between different members of the staff. In addition, </span><span style="color: red;">I
1296. opine</span><span style="color: #333333;"> </span><span style="color: red;">(check</span><span style="color: #333333;">) that to give facilities to attend seminaries, congres and other
1297. formation courses would help to enhace staff motivation, and as a
1298. result the company would probably improve its benefits. </span></span>
1299. </span></div>
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1301. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br />
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1306. <span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Final feedback</span></div>
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1308. <span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Writing not up to CAE level. Organisation and level of vocabulary need to be improved.</span></div>
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1310. Recommendation: Write a title, divide the text in 4 paragraphs only (Intro, Problem, Proposals, Conclusion) and improve the level of vocabulary used.</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/8875597240479211595/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/10/cpe-english-level-c1-proposal-sample.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/8875597240479211595'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/8875597240479211595'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/10/cpe-english-level-c1-proposal-sample.html' title='CAE Cambridge Exam: Proposal on Staff Morale'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-7027062649019187283</id><published>2018-09-04T05:41:00.001-07:00</published><updated>2018-12-01T04:56:45.612-08:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="C1"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Cambridge"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="cpe"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="English"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="REPORT"/><title type='text'>CPE Cambridge Exam: Report on a Jobs Fair</title><content type='html'>&lt;h2&gt;
1311. <span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif; font-size: small;"><span lang="EN-US" style="background-color: white; color: #222222;">Hello Gustavo, </span><span lang="EN-US" style="background-color: white; color: #222222;">This is another piece of writing I worked on. </span><span lang="EN-US" style="background-color: white; color: #222222;">Thanks for your hard work and dedication! </span></span></h2>
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/></span></a><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-size: 12.0pt;">A job fair
1316. was recently held in your town for international organizations and companies to</span><span style="color: #222222; font-size: 12pt;"> promote careers available for young people. You have been asked to write a
1317. report of the jobs fair for your college website. You should briefly describe
1318. the event and identify two or three promotions of particular interest and
1319. relevance. You should also evaluate the extent to which such events can open
1320. young people’s minds to new challenges and career opportunities. Write
1321. your </span><b style="color: #222222; font-size: 12pt;">report</b></span><span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">.</span></div>
1322. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1323. <br /></div>
1324. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-align: right;">
1325. <span style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;"><o:p><span style="color: red;">Feedback in red</span></o:p></span></div>
1326. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1327. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p><br /></o:p></span></div>
1328. <div align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: center;">
1329. <h3>
1330. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">Jobs fair in
1331. Valencia</span></b></span></h3>
1332. </div>
1333. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
1334. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1335. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1336. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;">Introduction</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1337. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1338. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;">The aim of this
1339. report is to provide an overview of the jobs fair held in Valencia, as well as
1340. to identify the promotions of more relevance and discuss to what extend events
1341. such as this, can benefit students in our college. <span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1342. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1343. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1344. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1345. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;">Overview and best promotions</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1346. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1347. <span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">Multiple
1348. international organizations met together at the Exhibition Centre last
1349. Saturday, September 1. Around 2,000 students from the region attended this
1350. annual event. Many programs were launched in this edition, with two of them
1351. clearly standing out. <o:p></o:p></span><br />
1352. <span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"></span><br />
1353. <a name='more'></a><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"><br /></span></div>
1354. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1355. <span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">The first one, was the one of the Berkeley
1356. University in California. They presented their new work and study program,
1357. especially addressed to business students. Hundreds applied for a chance to study
1358. in the USA and work for a Californian Start-up. </span></div>
1359. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1360. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;">The second one came from Amsterdam’s Queen University, offering a remunerated internship
1361. for future language teachers. </span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> </span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red;">(Improve connection between sentences : use of connectors /linking words)</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">    </span></span><br />
1362. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"></span><br /></span>
1363. <br />
1364. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">   </span></span></div>
1365. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1366. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;">New challenges and career opportunities</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1367. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1368. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-family: "arial" , sans-serif;"><strike>(Text was deleted) </strike>Here write what the task asks for: </span><span style="color: #222222; font-size: 16px;">You should also evaluate the extent to which such events can open young people’s minds to new challenges and career opportunities. </span></span></div>
1369. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1370. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1371. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1372. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;">Evaluation and recommendation</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;"> </span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1373. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1374. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: black; font-size: 12.0pt;"><strike>After careful
1375. and rigorous data assessment, I would highly encourage universities to</strike> not only
1376. continue to promote this event but also to provide sessions in order for future
1377. candidates to better understand the magnificent impact this type of experience
1378. would provide to their careers. </span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="color: red;">(Are you writing recommendations for univerties? or for your university? Who reads the University website? Students? Maybe you should write to them,).</span></span></span></div>
1379. <div class="MsoNormal">
1380. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1381. &lt;br /&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/7027062649019187283/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/09/cpe-jobs-fair-report-sample-and-feedback.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/7027062649019187283'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/7027062649019187283'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/09/cpe-jobs-fair-report-sample-and-feedback.html' title='CPE Cambridge Exam: Report on a Jobs Fair'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total><georss:featurename>Spain</georss:featurename><georss:point>40.463667000000008 -3.7492200000000366</georss:point><georss:box>14.533696500000008 -45.057814000000036 66.393637500000011 37.559373999999963</georss:box></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-4676696531421236329</id><published>2018-09-03T04:05:00.004-07:00</published><updated>2018-09-23T04:42:08.271-07:00</updated><title type='text'>CPE Spain 2018 Writing Sample and feedback</title><content type='html'>&lt;div dir=&quot;ltr&quot; style=&quot;line-height: 1.38; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: justify;&quot;&gt;
1382. <br />
1383. <h2>
1384. <span style="font-size: small;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">Hello Gustavo, </span></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><br style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;" /></span></span></h2>
1385. <h2>
1386. <span style="font-size: small;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">First, thanks for sharing such wise information on your blog. I will soon take the English C2 test on writing as it was the only part I failed back in May. </span></span></span><span style="font-size: small;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">I would like this piece of writing to be checked if possible. </span></span></span></h2>
1387. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><br style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;" /></span><a href="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSd5duvH2Go0iDW2Ga0s5WrfuKPfysxJitkNscS8vrvbpF0QBLX" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img alt="Resultado de imagen de couch potato" border="0" height="220" src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSd5duvH2Go0iDW2Ga0s5WrfuKPfysxJitkNscS8vrvbpF0QBLX" width="320" /></a><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-size: 13px; text-align: left; white-space: normal;"><b>Writing task:</b> </span></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-weight: 400; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">You have recently read an article from a youth magazine on the problem of inactivity in</span></span><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; text-align: left;"> young people. The magazine has invited its readers to respond to the topic by writing a short article of their own, which answers the following questions:</span><br />
1388. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-weight: 400; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">Why are our young people becoming 'couch potatoes', and what can we do to solve the problem?</span></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><br style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;" /></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-weight: 400; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">And this is my article!</span></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><br style="background-color: white; color: #262626; text-align: left; white-space: normal;" /></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-weight: 400; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">Thanks in advance, </span></span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><span style="background-color: white; color: #262626; font-weight: 400; text-align: left; white-space: normal;">N. B</span></span></div>
1389. <div dir="ltr" style="line-height: 1.38; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: justify;">
1390. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><br /></span></div>
1391. <div dir="ltr" style="line-height: 1.38; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: justify;">
1392. <span style="background-color: transparent; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"><span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Feedback comments in red</span></span></div>
1393. <h2 style="line-height: 1.38; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center;">
1394. </h2>
1395. <div>
1396. <div align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-outline-level: 2; text-align: center;">
1397. <h3>
1398. <span style="color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;">“<b>Millennial’s indoor
1399. syndrome” on the verge of becoming </b></span><span style="color: black; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"><b>the newest disease concern of our time</b>
1400.   </span></h3>
1401. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-size: 12.0pt;">(title too
1402. long??)</span><b><span style="color: black; font-size: 18.0pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></b></span></div>
1403. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1404. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1405. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1406. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">“I have to do
1407. something about this. I can only think of playing </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">on-line</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> games </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">and</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> binge-watch</span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">ing</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> the latest
1408. released series on Netflix. <s>and</s> I can already acknowledge that my
1409. sedentary <s>beacon of living</s> </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">way of life </span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">is simply not right”, says Juan Manuel, a 17 year old
1410. from Madrid, who was recently diagnosed with severe overweight. Juan Manuel’s
1411. unpleasant experience is becoming less anecdotal as health pundits have already
1412. raised a red flag alerting of what is <s>been</s> </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">being</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> called
1413. “Millennial’s indoor syndrome”. </span><span style="color: black; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1414. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1415. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"></span><br />
1416. <a name='more'></a><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1417. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1418. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">What is causing
1419. such </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">a</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> loss of
1420. interest in outdoor activities? And to what extent is this affecting other
1421. young people in Spain? The latest data from the National Research Institute
1422. shows how this is not an isolated case any more. Back in time, youngsters used to go to the park to do some sport and talk to each other in person, but
1423. communication tools such as WhatsApp and multiplayer video games have changed that.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span></span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">(Insert hier some
1424. statistics from the National Reseach Institute ??)</span><span style="color: black; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1425. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1426. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1427. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1428. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><s><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">Not long ago,
1429. this foreseen scenario was only a vague apprehension and, as predicted by
1430. experts, it’s become an outright concern </span></s><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">Experts
1431. believe Milennial's indoor syndrome is</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> caused by two
1432. different reasons. Firstly, parents are no longer spending quality time with
1433. their children due to higher pressure on their jobs. Secondly, media is
1434. aggressively targeting millennials into mobile devices consumption, resulting
1435. in less encouragement for physical activity. </span><span style="color: black; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1436. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1437. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1438. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1439. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><s><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">Even this
1440. highly conconcerning reality,</span></s><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> Good news is,
1441. details about an action plan are about to be released by the current Ministry
1442. of Health and Well-being. After a first press conference, where only sparse
1443. information was given, it seems that a notable shift in work and personal
1444. balance is about to happen, probably moving into a 35 hour work week. </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">(That deals with reason number one, but what about reason number two "media aggressively targeting
1445. millenials? What are they going to do about that?)</span><span style="color: black; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1446. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1447. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1448. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1449. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><s><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">When </span></s><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">If</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;"> officially
1450. announced, </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">this would mean </span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">parents are going to be able to spend longer hours
1451. with their children </span><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">and hopefully do some sport together. </span><span style="color: black; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">Further measures such as organising talks on the
1452. importance of doing physical activities is advised. </span><span style="color: black; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1453. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1454. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1455. <div align="right" class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; text-align: right;">
1456. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span style="color: red; font-family: "" "arial" "" , serif; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A;">Check number of
1457. words</span><span style="color: black; font-size: 13.5pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1458. <div class="MsoNormal">
1459. <br /></div>
1460. </div>
1461. </content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/4676696531421236329/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/09/cpe-2018-sample-entry-and-feedback.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/4676696531421236329'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/4676696531421236329'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/09/cpe-2018-sample-entry-and-feedback.html' title='CPE Spain 2018 Writing Sample and feedback'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-128152405916065076</id><published>2018-08-02T03:15:00.002-07:00</published><updated>2018-09-23T04:41:26.211-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Writing a report for the CPE exam. Sample and feedback</title><content type='html'>&lt;h2&gt;
1462. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: small;">Hi Gustavo<span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><br /></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Thanks for taking the time
1463. to read this, </span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Martina.</span></span></h2>
1464. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1465. <a href="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQQmaC5_OOH6fOQbGatyG1_K-pt4PoAcSb4Si79IIERjWIqA2qAyw" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img alt="Resultado de imagen de jobs fair young people" border="0" src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQQmaC5_OOH6fOQbGatyG1_K-pt4PoAcSb4Si79IIERjWIqA2qAyw" /></a></div>
1466. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1467. <b><i><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><br /></span></i></b>
1468. <b><i><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Writing Task:</span></i></b></div>
1469. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1470. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><i><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222;">A jobs fair was recently
1471. held in your town for international organisations and companies</span></i></span><i style="font-family: "Trebuchet MS", sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"> to promote
1472. careers available for young people. You have been asked to write a report of
1473. the jobs fair for your college website. You should briefly describe the event
1474. and identify two or three promotions of particular interest and relevance. You
1475. should also evaluate the extent to which such events can open young people’s
1476. minds to new challenges and career opportunities.</span></i></div>
1477. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1478. <i><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Write your report in
1479. 280-320 words.</span></i><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
1480. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt;">
1481. <br /></div>
1482. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt;">
1483. <span lang="EN-GB" style="color: red; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Feedback in red</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></div>
1484. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt;">
1485. <br /></div>
1486. <div align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: center;">
1487. <h3>
1488. <span style="color: red;"><span lang="EN-GB">(I suggest writing a title)</span></span></h3>
1489. </div>
1490. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt;">
1491. <br /></div>
1492. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt;">
1493. <u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><br /></span></u></div>
1494. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1495. <u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">I<span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">ntroduction</span></span></u><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1496. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1497. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">The aim of this report is
1498. to describe a jobs fair that was recently held in our town. As well as, to identify<strike>ing</strike> interesting and relevant promotions made by the companies and
1499. organisations; </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: #3d85c6;">and to evaluate<strike>ing</strike> whether the event opened the youngsters’ minds or
1500. not. </span><span style="color: red;">(who? in what way?)</span></span></span></div>
1501. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1502. <u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><br /></span></u></div>
1503. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1504. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Description of the event</span></u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1505. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1506. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">For the first time in a
1507. while the jobs fair was held in the city. It was at the Town Hall, where there
1508. is plenty of space </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: #3d85c6;">to came out such a big event</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">. </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">(check!) </span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">The fair was well-organised;
1509. there was a general topic per day, and each there were not only interactive
1510. talks and presentations but also some engaging games. The general topics were
1511. Physical science, Art, Medicine and Social science. For example, the first day,
1512. Physical science, there were stands which presented different projects that
1513. were done by students who had finished </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">their <strike>career </strike>studies.</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1514. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1515. <u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"></span></u><br />
1516. <a name='more'></a><u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><br /></span></u></div>
1517. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1518. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Promotions of interest</span></u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">:</span><span style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1519. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1520. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">All promotions were
1521. particularly eye-catching but the one which kept me spellbound during all the
1522. presentation was civil engineer. The announcer said such compelling words that
1523. everyone was sure that is </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">one of the best careers</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">. Summarising, he said there
1524. is a wide variety of job opportunities around the world, so you could also have
1525. the chance to travel. Besides, it requires a lot of skills, what make </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">the
1526. career </span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">challenging. Furthermore, tourism manager was a protagonist during the
1527. fair. It is a really strenuous job, which involves having a great deal of
1528. general knowledge. </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">Despite, you would be able to travel virtually all the world
1529. as a lot of cultural knowledge is needed. (check!)</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1530. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt;">
1531. <u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><br /></span></u></div>
1532. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1533. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Evaluation of the benefits
1534. of the event</span></u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1535. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1536. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">As far as I know, this kind
1537. of event, whether they have a good organisation or not, are entirely beneficial
1538. to the students; due to the fact that present </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">careers </span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">which are not that common
1539. and that students might not be aware of. Besides, s</span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">ome of the careers does</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"> take
1540. a short time studying what it is important for some adolescents. Also, those
1541. </span><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;">careers</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"> are much more challenging than the ones everybody knows.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: #222222; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1542. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1543. <u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><br /></span></u></div>
1544. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1545. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">Conclusion</span></u><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">:</span><span style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1546. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: 11.75pt; text-align: justify;">
1547. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;">To sum up, it was not only
1548. worthy to go to the event, but also a good movement made by our local
1549. authorities as it is interesting and beneficial for the student´s life.</span><span style="color: #222222; mso-ansi-language: #580A; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-language: #580A; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1550. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
1551. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1552. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
1553. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p><br /></o:p></span></div>
1554. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
1555. <span style="color: #222222; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; font-size: 12.0pt;"><o:p><br /></o:p></span></div>
1556. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
1557. <span style="font-size: 12pt;"><o:p><span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">General feedback: </span></o:p></span></div>
1558. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
1559. <span style="font-size: 12pt;"><o:p><span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Well-organised text. Task was fulfilled. </span></o:p></span></div>
1560. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
1561. <span style="font-size: 12pt;"><o:p><span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Style is rather too informal, I would say. </span></o:p></span></div>
1562. <div class="MsoNormal" style="background: white; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm;">
1563. <span style="font-size: 12pt;"><o:p><span style="color: red; font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Check: vocabulary: use of "career"</span></o:p></span></div>
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1565. <span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><span style="background-color: white; font-size: 12pt;">Hi Gustavo,</span><span style="background-color: white; font-size: 12pt;">Please, could you check my report? </span><span style="font-size: 12pt;">Thanks,</span><br />Alicia</span></h2>
1566. <div class="Default">
1567. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"></span></div>
1568. <br />
1569. <div class="Default">
1570. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;"><br /></span></div>
1571. <div class="Default">
1572. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;"><br /></span></div>
1573. <div class="Default">
1574. <span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;"><span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif; font-size: medium;">Writing Task:</span></span></div>
1575. <div class="Default">
1576. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;"><br /></span></div>
1577. <div class="Default">
1578. <span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">Write an answer to </span><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "TXJIDE+Arial-BoldMT",sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-family: TXJIDE+Arial-BoldMT; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">one </span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">of the questions </span><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "TXJIDE+Arial-BoldMT",sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-family: TXJIDE+Arial-BoldMT; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">2 – 5 </span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">in this
1579. part. Write your answer in </span><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "TXJIDE+Arial-BoldMT",sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-family: TXJIDE+Arial-BoldMT; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">280 – 320 </span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">words in an
1580. appropriate style </span><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "TXJIDE+Arial-BoldMT",sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-family: TXJIDE+Arial-BoldMT; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">on the separate answer sheet</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">. <o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1581. <div class="Default">
1582. <span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1583. <div class="Default" style="text-align: justify;">
1584. <a href="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQAhWznNFmHyNNOvy2iURcu_LqpKFzEvl0hAKlHEL-Z51QWrx9S" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img alt="Resultado de imagen de jobs fair young people" border="0" src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQAhWznNFmHyNNOvy2iURcu_LqpKFzEvl0hAKlHEL-Z51QWrx9S" /></a><span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">A jobs fair was recently held in your town for
1585. international organisations and companies</span></span><span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;"> to promote careers available for
1586. young people. You have been asked to write a report of the jobs fair for your
1587. college website. You should briefly describe the event and identify two or
1588. three promotions of particular interest and relevance. You should also evaluate
1589. the extent to which such events can open young people’s minds to new challenges
1590. and career opportunities. Write your </span><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "TXJIDE+Arial-BoldMT",sans-serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-family: TXJIDE+Arial-BoldMT; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;">report</span></b></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB; mso-bidi-font-size: 7.0pt;"><span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">.</span></span></div>
1591. <div class="MsoNormal">
1592. <br /></div>
1593. <div class="MsoNormal">
1594. <br /></div>
1595. <div class="MsoNormal">
1596. <br /></div>
1597. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center;">
1598. <h3>
1599. <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="font-size: large;">Jobs
1600. fair in Barcelona</span></span></b></h3>
1601. </div>
1602. <div class="MsoNormal">
1603. <br /></div>
1604. <div class="MsoNormal">
1605. <u><span lang="EN-GB"><br /></span></u></div>
1606. <div class="MsoNormal">
1607. <u><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Description of the event<o:p></o:p></span></u></div>
1608. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1609. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1610. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1611. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Last June I had the opportunity to attend an international jobs fair
1612. <strike>which was</strike> hosted by Barcelona University <strike>from 3<sup>rd</sup> to 6<sup>th</sup>
1613. June</strike>. It was aimed not only at Barcelona University’s students but also at young
1614. people wishing to broaden their career horizons. There were a handful of stands
1615. promoting job offers, in which it was possible to leave your Curriculum Vitae,
1616. so it was a pretty good chance for those looking for employment <strike>who wanted to be taken into
1617. consideration</strike>. This was <strike>regarded as</strike> also a great opportunity to make networking. <strike>build contacts in
1618. their field of expertise, which could have a positive impact in their jobs
1619. prospects in the future</strike>. <span style="color: red;">(Description of the event is missing. Were there speakers? Was it possible to eat there? How many companies took part? What kind of jobs were available?) </span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
1620. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1621. <span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red; font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"></span></span></div>
1622. <a name='more'></a><span style="color: red; font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span>
1623. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1624. <span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1625. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1626. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><u>Promotions of interest </u></span></div>
1627. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1628. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1629. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1630. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">P<strike>ersonally
1631. speaking, I would go as far as to say that there were two promotions which were
1632. exceptionally fascinating</strike>. <span style="color: red;">(Sounds really old-fashioned) </span>The first one was from a company called Star, which
1633. offered a job position as a cultural mediator. They were actively seeking for
1634. young people who were fluent in at least two languages and knew how to manage themselves
1635. in an intercultural atmosphere. Also, they were willing to offer a training
1636. course for those interested. <strike>so even if the applicants were not familiar with
1637. the cultural background required, they would be suitable for the job. </strike><o:p></o:p></span></div>
1638. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1639. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Regarding the
1640. second promotion that drew my attention, it was from California University.
1641. They were offering job positions as a Spanish teacher abroad, and it was
1642. particularly interesting due to the fact that candidates had the chance to
1643. become members of the investigation team of the university. <strike>Therefore,
1644. regardless of their branch of knowledge, applicants could teach Spanish and
1645. also advance their careers by investigating in a prestigious university.</strike><o:p></o:p></span></div>
1646. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1647. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><strike><br /></strike></span></div>
1648. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1649. <span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="color: red;"><strike>(</strike> A whole paragraph is missing: See task/ </span></span>You should also evaluate the extent to which such events can open young people’s minds to new challenges and career opportunities.)</span></div>
1650. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1651. <u><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span></u></div>
1652. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1653. <u><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Conclusions<o:p></o:p></span></u></div>
1654. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1655. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1656. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1657. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">I general, I can
1658. say that the jobs fair surpassed any expectations I had. In my opinion, this
1659. was an eye-broadening experience as young people were able to see the reality
1660. in the job market, and also to lean towards a different path in their careers.
1661. For instance, some of my friends had never thought of teaching Spanish until
1662. they attended the fair.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
1663. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1664. <span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1665. &lt;br /&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/137933785365966059/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/07/cpe-2018-report-on-jobs-fair-sample.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/137933785365966059'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/137933785365966059'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/07/cpe-2018-report-on-jobs-fair-sample.html' title='CPE 2018 Report on a jobs fair Sample'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-107362172284032758</id><published>2018-07-07T03:33:00.002-07:00</published><updated>2018-09-29T07:14:28.649-07:00</updated><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="C1"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="cpe letter"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="English"/><category scheme="http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#" term="Sample writings"/><title type='text'>CAE and CPE Writing training: Formal letter Sample and feedback</title><content type='html'>&lt;br /&gt;
1666. <div style="background-color: white;">
1667. <h2>
1668. <span style="font-size: small;"><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Hi again Gustavo,</span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">I hope you are fine!</span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Could you please take a look at my letter? As always, I'll share and like!</span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Thank you again for your previous feedback, it has been really useful and even though I keep making mistakes I feel more confident now about my writing, because now I know what to do in order to improve. </span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Thank you!</span></span></h2>
1669. </div>
1670. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-layout-grid-align: none; text-align: justify; text-autospace: none;">
1671. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"></span></div>
1672. <div style="background-color: white; font-family: calibri, helvetica, sans-serif;">
1673. <br /></div>
1674. <div style="background-color: white; font-family: calibri, helvetica, sans-serif;">
1675. <br /></div>
1676. <div style="background-color: white;">
1677. <b><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Writing task:</span></b></div>
1678. <a href="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTriT_aGs46XD5PIia5FKkllir4yyJlJPnO9lFmHpmkB28XGDwy" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img alt="Resultado de imagen de writing formal letter" border="0" src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTriT_aGs46XD5PIia5FKkllir4yyJlJPnO9lFmHpmkB28XGDwy" /></a><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span><br />
1679. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-layout-grid-align: none; text-align: justify; text-autospace: none;">
1680. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">You
1681. recently attended a training course which was exceptionally good. Now you hav</span><span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">e
1682. decided to write a letter directly to the course leader. Say why the course was
1683. exceptional, why it was particularly suitable for you and how you are
1684. benefiting from it now.</span></div>
1685. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-layout-grid-align: none; text-align: justify; text-autospace: none;">
1686. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1687. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1688. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif; mso-bidi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font: minor-latin;">Write
1689. your <b>letter</b>.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
1690. <div style="border-bottom: solid windowtext 1.0pt; border: none; mso-border-bottom-alt: solid windowtext .75pt; mso-element: para-border-div; padding: 0cm 0cm 1.0pt 0cm;">
1691. <div class="MsoNormal" style="border: none; line-height: 115%; mso-border-bottom-alt: solid windowtext .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 1.0pt 0cm; padding: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1692. <br /></div>
1693. <div class="MsoNormal" style="border: none; line-height: 115%; mso-border-bottom-alt: solid windowtext .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 1.0pt 0cm; padding: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1694. <span lang="EN-GB"><o:p><span style="color: red;">Feedback in red</span></o:p></span></div>
1695. </div>
1696. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1697. <br /></div>
1698. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1699. <span lang="EN-GB"><br /></span>
1700. <span lang="EN-GB"><br /></span>
1701. <br />
1702. <h3>
1703. <span lang="EN-GB">Dear Diana, <span style="color: red;">(Is Dear Diana formal enough?)</span></span></h3>
1704. </div>
1705. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1706. <br /></div>
1707. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1708. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">I attended the leadership course which took place in Barcelona
1709. University last June. I am writing to give you my impressions on<strike> such</strike> the course, which in my humble opinion, is one of the best courses I have had the pleasure
1710. <strike>to attend. </strike>of going to. <span style="color: red;"><strike>(</strike>Not to use the word "attend" twice) // (You should mention what kind of course that was)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
1711. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1712. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1713. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1714. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">To be honest, I believed that it would fall short on my expectations,
1715. as I have previously <strike>attended </strike>been to other courses of similar nature not resulting to
1716. be quite what I had hoped for. However, I can undoubtedly say that this course
1717. was exceptional -the contents, the instructor and the methods were ideal to
1718. accomplish the goal of the course. Arguably, what I liked the most was the role
1719. play <strike>game </strike>activity, in which we had the opportunity to face a “real” situation, in which
1720. we could put in practise the <strike>mechanisms</strike> theory we had previously learnt. Not only<strike> it</strike>
1721. was htat fascinating, but also the instructor’s feedback. <strike>-Evaristo was exceptionally
1722. empathic and did know how to lead us to the right path. </strike><o:p></o:p></span></div>
1723. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1724. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"></span><br />
1725. <a name='more'></a><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1726. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1727. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">As a matter of fact, I am currently using what I learnt in the course, in my job as a  project manager. I
1728. balance both work and studies, so I started applying some of your time-management techniques. No
1729. sooner had I started using them, than my partners perceived the sudden change. They
1730. say that I have improved my work.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
1731. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1732. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1733. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1734. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Moreover, this leadership course is aimed at a labour environment,
1735. but it can also be applied in other aspects of life. Being an introvert person,
1736. I have always had trouble when having a conversation over the phone or even
1737. when having a face to face with any unknown person. However, after taking this
1738. course, I feel more comfortable in these daily situations and I am confident
1739. that my stress level has decreased significantly, improving therefore my life
1740. quality. <span style="color: red;">(I would change the whole paragraph. Not clear what kind of course it was. You should clarify that in paragraph one)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
1741. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1742. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1743. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1744. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">I cannot thank you enough for organising this course. It has
1745. significantly helped me in many ways, and I am thankful for that. I hope you keep
1746. up the good work.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
1747. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1748. <span style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1749. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1750. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Yours faithfully, <span style="color: red;">(Why so formal? You started the letter with Dear Diana, as if she was your friend)</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
1751. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 115%; text-align: justify;">
1752. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "trebuchet ms" , sans-serif;">Alicia<o:p></o:p></span></div>
1753. &lt;br /&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/107362172284032758/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/07/cae-and-cpe-writing-training-formal.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/107362172284032758'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/107362172284032758'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/07/cae-and-cpe-writing-training-formal.html' title='CAE and CPE Writing training: Formal letter Sample and feedback'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total><georss:featurename>Germany</georss:featurename><georss:point>51.165691 10.451526000000058</georss:point><georss:box>40.944362 -10.202770999999942 61.387020000000007 31.105823000000058</georss:box></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-875838826928199845</id><published>2018-07-04T10:23:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2018-09-23T04:37:26.369-07:00</updated><title type='text'>CPE Article on Gap Year  </title><content type='html'>&lt;h2&gt;
1754. <span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif; font-size: small;"><br />Hi Gustavo,<br />I hope you are doing fine! Could you please take a look at my article? I did not perform well in the last one so I expect to have learnt from my mistakes and do better in the present one <img alt="😊" class="CToWUd" data-goomoji="1f60a" data-image-whitelisted="" goomoji="1f60a" src="https://mail.google.com/mail/e/1f60a" style="margin: 0px 0.2ex; max-height: 24px; vertical-align: middle;" /><br />You can find the task attached to this e-mail. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "Arial",sans-serif;"><br /></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "Arial",sans-serif;"><br /></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "Arial",sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: xx-small;">Regards</span></span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "Arial",sans-serif;"><span style="font-size: xx-small;">Alicia</span></span></span></h2>
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1766. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">You have been asked to write an article
1767. for Job Prospects magazine, a publication for 18-30 year olds, on the following
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1775. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">How taking a gap year*can enhance your
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1778.  *A gap year is a break usually taken between leaving school/college and
1779.  starting university, and is seen as a valuable way to gain work experience
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/></a><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">You should focus on the types of job and
1788. leisure opportunities for young people taking a gap year in your country (or a
1789. country that you know well), the types of skills that can be gained and the
1790. likely value of these to potential employers.<br style="mso-special-character: line-break;" />
1791. <!--[if !supportLineBreakNewLine]--><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;" />
1792. <!--[endif]--><o:p></o:p></span></div>
1793. <div style="border-bottom: solid windowtext 1.0pt; border: none; mso-border-bottom-alt: solid windowtext .75pt; mso-element: para-border-div; padding: 0cm 0cm 1.0pt 0cm;">
1794. <div class="MsoNormal" style="border: none; mso-border-bottom-alt: solid windowtext .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 1.0pt 0cm; padding: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1795. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: "Arial",sans-serif;"><span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Write the <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">article</b> for the readers of the magazine
1796. (around 280 - 320 words).</span><span style="font-family: arial, sans-serif;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
1797. <div class="MsoNormal" style="border: none; mso-border-bottom-alt: solid windowtext .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 1.0pt 0cm; padding: 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1798. <br /></div>
1799. </div>
1800. <div class="MsoNormal">
1801. <br /></div>
1802. <h2 style="text-align: center;">
1803. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">TAKING A GAP YEAR: ONE STEP FORWARD TO BECOMING
1804. AN ADULT</span></h2>
1805. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1806. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Nowadays, taking a gap year is becoming
1807. a popular trend among young people. Not only does it constitute a way to escape
1808. from the daily routine, but also provides young people with a great opportunity
1809. to learn new skills in preparation for their future jobs.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
1810. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1811. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1812. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1813. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">The easiest option to gain experience
1814. and learn useful skills in a gap year is volunteering to do social work. Volunteers have the
1815. opportunity to gain a huge amount of valuable experience<strike>s</strike>, as helping other
1816. human <strike>or animal</strike> beings or animals is <strike>so</strike> an enriching experience. Also, they usually learn
1817. <strike>how to deal with different types of people </strike>soft skills, an ability which may be regarded as
1818. useful in jobs such as hotel receptionist or project manager, where social
1819. abilities and empathy are almost compulsory. Even so, volunteers should always
1820. bear in mind that volunteering is not paid, which <strike>would be its most
1821. discouraging feature.</strike> means thez will have to ask their parents for financial support.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
1822. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1823. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"></span><br />
1824. <a name='more'></a><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1825. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1826. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Another option to consider is to travel
1827. abroad and engage in the Au Pair community. Au Pairs are usually hosted by
1828. foreign families in exchange of services, which often include looking after the
1829. family’s children. The Au Pair programme has the advantage that the applicants
1830. are paid for their services and have
1831. the chance to attend a language course. This way, Au Pairs can learn a foreign
1832. language as they are immersed in the target culture, broadening their horizons,
1833. learning about cultures other than theirs and boosting their own confidence.
1834. Being fluent in foreign languages and having a high self-steem are qualities which definitely will help these young people when looking for a job in the future.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
1835. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1836. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span></div>
1837. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1838. <span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Of course, taking a gap year is a
1839. personal decision. We should weigh its pros and cons at an individual level
1840. before making any decision, but in the light of its many personal and
1841. professional benefits, parents should encourage their children to take a gap
1842. year in order to take a step forward in their journey to maturity.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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1845. &lt;br /&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/875838826928199845/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/07/cpe-article-on-gap-year.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/875838826928199845'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/875838826928199845'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/07/cpe-article-on-gap-year.html' title='CPE Article on Gap Year  '/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-3029592493613881513</id><published>2018-07-03T11:40:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2018-07-03T11:47:43.957-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Overcoming Writer´s Block</title><content type='html'>&lt;div&gt;
1846. <span style="color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">This </span><a href="https://medium.com/descript/overcoming-writers-block-with-automatic-transcription-f85bbb30eda6" style="color: black; font-family: "times new roman";"><span style="color: #1155cc; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">article</span><span style="color: #1155cc; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"> </span></a><span style="font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">is originally published by <span style="color: #1155cc;"><u>Descript</u></span></span><span style="color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">.</span></div>
1847. <div dir="ltr" style="line-height: 1.38; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 33pt;">
1848. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "arial"; font-size: 31.5pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 700; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"><img height="242" src="https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/MiyhnLd9hJjVl45Jv1VH1HxM8bAQw8MP1Hj0XYumkfy1N4bmbR2UN-aYxMHCrnlaLV_NJSw1VyeCkh21a2b2DcjSbqq696LhWGXTGTCvq57UipaV5PE6LqPxfDbRoVPfOl4gSE5i" style="border: none; transform: rotate(0rad);" width="320" /></span></div>
1849. <div dir="ltr" style="background-color: white; line-height: 1.896; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 29pt;">
1850. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1851. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">If you’re a writer — of books, essays, scripts, blog posts, whatever — </span></div>
1852. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1853. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">you’re familiar with the phenomenon: the blank screen, a looming deadline, </span></div>
1854. <div style="text-align: justify;">
1855. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">and a sinking feeling in your gut that pairs poorly with the jug of coffee you drank earlier.</span></div>
1856. </div>
1857. <div dir="ltr" style="background-color: white; line-height: 1.896; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 29pt;">
1858. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"></span></div>
1859. <a name='more'></a><br />
1860. <br />
1861. <div dir="ltr" style="background-color: white; line-height: 1.896; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 22pt;">
1862. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">If you know that rumble all too well: this post is for you. </span><br />
1863. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Maybe it’ll help you get out of a rut; at the very least, it’s good for a few minutes of </span><br />
1864. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">procrastination.</span></div>
1865. <div dir="ltr" style="background-color: white; line-height: 1.896; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 22pt;">
1866. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Here’s the core idea: thinking out loud is often less arduous than writing. </span><br />
1867. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">And it’s now easier than ever to combine the two, </span><br />
1868. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">thanks to recent advances in speech recognition technology.</span></div>
1869. <div dir="ltr" style="background-color: white; line-height: 1.896; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 22pt;">
1870. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Of course, dictation is nothing new — and plenty of writers have taken advantage of it. </span><br />
1871. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Carl Sagan’s voluminous output was facilitated by his process of speaking </span><br />
1872. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">into an audio recorder, to be transcribed later by an assistant </span><br />
1873. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">(you can listen to some of his dictations in the </span><a href="https://www.loc.gov/collections/finding-our-place-in-the-cosmos-with-carl-sagan/articles-and-essays/carl-sagan-and-the-tradition-of-science/sagans-thinking-and-writing-process/" style="text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #1155cc; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: underline; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Library of Congress</span></a><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">!) </span><br />
1874. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">And software like Dragon’s </span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: italic; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">Naturally Speaking</span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"> has offered automated transcription </span><br />
1875. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">for people with the patience and budget to pursue it.</span></div>
1876. <div dir="ltr" style="background-color: white; line-height: 1.896; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 22pt;">
1877. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">But it’s only in the last couple of years that automated transcription has reached a sweet spot</span><br />
1878. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"> — of convenience, affordability and </span><a href="https://medium.com/descript/comparing-the-accuracy-of-automatic-transcription-services-519fec134465" style="text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #1155cc; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: underline; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">accuracy</span></a><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">—that makes it practical to use it more casually. </span><br />
1879. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">And I’ve found it increasingly useful for generating a sort of proto-first draft: </span><br />
1880. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">an alternative approach to the painful process of converting the nebulous wisps inside </span><br />
1881. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">your head into something you can actually work with.</span></div>
1882. <div dir="ltr" style="background-color: white; line-height: 1.896; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 22pt;">
1883. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">I call this process </span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: italic; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">idea extraction</span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;"> (though these ideas may be more accurately </span><br />
1884. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">dubbed </span><a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brain_Droppings" style="text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #1155cc; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: underline; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">brain droppings</span></a><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "georgia"; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre;">). </span></div>
1885. <div dir="ltr" style="background-color: white; line-height: 1.896; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 22pt;">
1886. <span style="color: #073763; font-family: arial;"><span style="font-size: 18.6667px; white-space: pre;"><b>To continue reading, click on the links above.</b></span></span></div>
1887. </content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/3029592493613881513/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/07/overcoming-writers-block.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/3029592493613881513'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/3029592493613881513'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/07/overcoming-writers-block.html' title='Overcoming Writer´s Block'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media="http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/" url="https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/MiyhnLd9hJjVl45Jv1VH1HxM8bAQw8MP1Hj0XYumkfy1N4bmbR2UN-aYxMHCrnlaLV_NJSw1VyeCkh21a2b2DcjSbqq696LhWGXTGTCvq57UipaV5PE6LqPxfDbRoVPfOl4gSE5i=s72-c" height="72" width="72"/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7079823750453744013.post-7208213351955153521</id><published>2018-07-03T06:44:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2018-07-03T06:44:05.550-07:00</updated><title type='text'>CPE 2018 Letter to the editor Sample and feedback</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style=&quot;background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;&quot;&gt;Hi Gustavo,&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
1888. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1889. <br /></div>
1890. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1891. Hope you are doing well. I am taking my CPE exam this July, soI would be very grateful if you could review the writing that I attach to this email.</div>
1892. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1893. <br /></div>
1894. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1895. It is a letter to an editor (part 2 of the test), that should address the following points:</div>
1896. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1897. <br /></div>
1898. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1899. 1) it should be about the topic of friendship;</div>
1900. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1901. 2) it should mention a friendship that is special for me;</div>
1902. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1903. 3) it should contain my opinion on the difficulties in mantaining frienships through time and changing circumstances.</div>
1904. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1905. <br /></div>
1906. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1907. Thank you very much!</div>
1908. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1909. <br /></div>
1910. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1911. Kind regards,</div>
1912. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1913. Ingrid.</div>
1914. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1915. <br /></div>
1916. <div style="background-color: white; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1917. <span style="color: red;">Feedback in red</span></div>
1918. <div style="background-color: white; color: #222222; font-family: sans-serif; font-size: 13px;">
1919. <br /></div>
1920. <div style="background-color: white; font-family: sans-serif;">
1921. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm;">
1922. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;">Dear Editor,<o:p></o:p></span></div>
1923. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm;">
1924. <br /></div>
1925. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1926. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman",serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">I am
1927. writing in reply to the article about friendship that was featured in the last issue
1928. of your magazine and to which readers were invited to respond presenting their
1929. views on the topic. <strike>Therefore, </strike>I would like to share some of my thoughts on this
1930. subject with <strike>the magazine’s</strike> your readers.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
1931. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1932. <br /></div>
1933. <a name='more'></a><br />
1934.  
1935.  
1936. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1937. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><span style="color: #222222;">It is often
1938. said that friends are the family you choose for yourself, for true friends
1939. remain by your side and unconditionally support you no matter what decisions
1940. you make. As for me, I could not agree more with that statement. Thus, I see my
1941. life-long friends, with whom I have a very special friendship, as family. Hence,
1942. like my relatives, the friends who I have known since I was a kid, are a fundamental
1943. pillar in my life. </span><span style="color: red;">(Would be nice to have some examples or anecdotes)</span></span></div>
1944. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1945. <br /></div>
1946. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1947. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><span style="color: #222222;">Some people
1948. argue that friendships are subject to many changes over time, as childhood
1949. friendships have little to do with teenage ones and even lesser with the ones had
1950. during adult life, and that such changes may threaten the continuity of a
1951. relationship. However, it is important to remember that real friends stand by
1952. each other and strive to overcome the obstacles that they might face. </span><span style="color: red;">(An example maybe?)</span></span></div>
1953. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1954. <br /></div>
1955. <div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1956. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><span style="color: #222222;">Of course, as
1957. time goes by, it may become more difficult to stay in touch with friends, either
1958. because some of them </span><strike style="color: #222222;">might be living</strike><span style="color: #222222;"> live abroad, or because a large portion of their
1959. time is now dedicated to their demanding jobs. Perhaps, some circumstances have
1960. changed, and there are ones that have their own families and do not have much
1961. time for meeting up. It is true that there is a handful of events that may end
1962. up distancing friends or changing their relationship. Nonetheless, it is also
1963. true that friends are the ones willing to remain in each other’s life, even
1964. with all these adverse </span><u>facts.</u><span style="color: #222222;"> </span><span style="color: red;">(facts?)</span></span></div>
1965. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1966. <br /></div>
1967. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1968. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman",serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">The bottom
1969. line is that personal relationships are never easy, and friendship in not an
1970. exception to that, but they are also very valuable and worth fighting for. After
1971. all, some friends are like family, and external factors should not stand in the
1972. way. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
1973. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; line-height: 150%; margin: 6pt 0cm; text-align: justify;">
1974. <br /></div>
1975. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; line-height: 150%; text-align: justify;">
1976. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman",serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;">Yours
1977. faithfully,<o:p></o:p></span></div>
1978. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; text-align: justify;">
1979. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman",serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><o:p>Ingrid (Lastname)</o:p></span></div>
1980. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; text-align: justify;">
1981. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman",serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><o:p><br /></o:p></span></div>
1982. <div class="MsoNormal" style="color: #222222; text-align: justify;">
1983. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman",serif; mso-ansi-language: EN-US;"><o:p><br /></o:p></span></div>
1984. <div class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: justify;">
1985. <span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><o:p><span style="color: red;">Feedback: I would appreciate if you incorporate some examples, stories or anecdotes to make it less abstract. After all, it is not an essay. </span><span style="color: #222222;"> </span></o:p></span></div>
1986. </div>
1987. </content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/feeds/7208213351955153521/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/07/cpe-2018-letter-to-editor-sample-and.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/7208213351955153521'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7079823750453744013/posts/default/7208213351955153521'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://cpesamplewritings.blogspot.com/2018/07/cpe-2018-letter-to-editor-sample-and.html' title='CPE 2018 Letter to the editor Sample and feedback'/><author><name>Gustavo Albarracin</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00447092225650198516</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry></feed>

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